Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I am traveling around, I watch people a lot in order kill time. The other day, I saw a couple at an airport. They were not worn business clothes, but the man were carrying a suitcase. Every few second, the woman had looked around. I wondered that someone was following them. Suddenly I remembered a story in a newspaper I had read a week before: the bank clerk stole one million pounds and disappeared with his wife. The couple real looked like them. Maybe I should stop them. Just then, I saw them say goodbye to each other, and the woman walk away.

Well, sometimes I make mistakes like that. But I find it very useful for mine writing.

Answer

kill前加to

worn→wearing

were→was

second→seconds

去掉had

that→if/whether

the→a

real→really

walk→walking

mine→my

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者旅行时总喜欢去观察别人，当然这期间总会有判断失误的时候，但是作者把他们当成宝贵的写作材料。

1. 考查固定搭配。in order to“为了”表目的。故在kill前加to。

2. 考查非谓语动词。结合语意，他们没有穿正装，主语they和wear之间是主动语态。故将worn改为wearing。

3. 考查主谓一致。分析句子可知，the man 是句子的主语，谓语动词应该是单数。故将were改为was。

4. 考查名词的数。second“秒”，是个可数名词，不能单独使用。故将second改为seconds。

5. 考查时态。结合上下句，作者描述的是过去的事情，所以用过去式，had looked around 是过去完成时，时态不一致。故将had去掉。

6. 考查连词。结合上文，他们的行为有些不自在，所以我在想是否有人在跟踪他们。分析句子可知，这里缺少了“是否”。故将that改为if/weather。

7. 考查冠词。冠词a“一个”，the“这个”；通过语意，作者一周前读了一本书，讲述的是：一个银行职员偷走100万英镑后，和他妻子消失的故事。故将the改为a。

8. 考查副词。副词修饰动词做状语，此处用副词really修饰动词looked like。故将real改为really。

9. 考查谓语动词。分析句子可知，and连接两个并列的谓语动词saw和walk，文章时态是过去时，所以walk需要用过去时。故将walk改为walked。

10. 考查代词。mine是名词性物主代词；my是形容词性物主代词。分析句子，此处应该是my来修饰后面的writing。故将mine改为my。