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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1、答案请写在答题卷上;

2、只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分;

3、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

4、答题符号、格式要规范:

One June, I helped my grandma water the freshly planted flowers around the house. She was so gentle with them no wonder they grew so fast. When all the work were finished, I ran to get my bike to ride for a while. As I was getting on it, however, I noticed there was anything new. I got off and kneel down on the walkway leading to our house. I found a single wild flower coming out of a crack by the walkway, without the water, soil or love.

The surprised new life hit me a lot. Sometimes in my own life, I felt my grow looked like grandma’s flowers, that were loved and cared for. At other times I felt as if I were that wild flower, growing by the walkway quiet and having to grow through the solid concrete. I realized that it doesn’t matter where you grow and it just matters that you grow.

 

1. no前加that 2. were→was 3. anything→something 4. kneel→knelt/kneeled 5. 去掉the 6. surprised→surprising 7. grow→growth 8. that→which 9. quiet→quietly 10. and→but 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。作者通过对奶奶细心养的花和顽强生长的野花的对比,联系到自己的生长,意识到重要的不是生长在哪里而是你的成长。 1. 考查连词。句意:她对它们如此温柔,难怪他们长得这么快。so...that...如此……以至于……是固定句型,故no前加that。 2. 考查主谓一致。句意:当所有的工作都完成,我跑去骑了一会儿自行车。Work“工作”是不可数名词,谓语动词用单数,故将were改为was。 3. 考查代词。anything主要用于否定句和疑问句,something主要用于肯定句中,本句表示有一些新的东西,故将anything改为something。 4. 考查动词时态。and连接并列谓语,根据语境用一般过去时,故将kneel改为knelt/kneeled。 5. 考查冠词。句意:我发现一朵野花从人行道上的裂缝里出来,没有水、土壤或爱。此处water表示泛指,故去掉water前the。 6. 考查ing形式形容词。修饰物用ing形容词修饰,表示事物的特征;ed形式形容词修饰人,表示人的感受,此处表示“这个令人吃惊的新生命”。故将surprised改为surprising。 7. 考查名词。形容词性物主代词修饰名词,grow是动词,名词形式是growth,故将grow改为growth。 8. 考查定语从句的关系词。此处引导非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词flowers,从句中作主语,引导非限制性定语从句用关系代词which,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,故将that改为which。 9. 考查副词。修饰动词growing用副词作状语,故将quiet改为quietly。 10. 考查连词。句意:我意识到你在哪里成长并不重要,重要的是你在成长。前后文是转折关系,故将and改为but。  
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