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假定英语课上,老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As is known to all that we students have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know few of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. Neither that we have learned in books nor in class can have the same important effect on us as what we have learned through personally practice. In social practice, we can surely make a rapid progress in both knowledge and practical ability. However, when we take part-time jobs, we may get paid more or less to help our families. Thus, I suggested we senior school students should take part-time jobs in our holiday, if possible.

 

1. As → It 2. few→little 3.在make up 之后加上for 4. Take→Taking 5. Neither之后的that →what 6. personally→personal 7.删掉rapid前面的a 8. However→Besides/Additionally/Moreover/Furthermore 9. suggested→suggest 10. holiday→holidays 【解析】 这是一篇说明文。短文讲的是学生在假期进行社会实践的好处,作者建议学生在可能的情况下应在放假时做一些兼职工作。 1.考查it的用法。根据固定句式It is known to all that…表示“众所周知……”,it做形式主语。故As 改为 It。 2.考查代词。根据句意“对于社会了解的很少”,few指代可数名词,little指代不可数名词,了解的内容应该是不可数的,所以用little。故few改为little。 3.考查介词。根据短语make up for表示“弥补,补偿”。故在make up 之后加上for。 4.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知take在句中作非谓语动词,且本句中缺少主语,故用动名词形式taking。句首字母要大写。故Take改为Taking。 5.考查连接词。本句为主语从句,句中learn缺少宾语,故what来引导。故Neither之后的that 改为what。 6.考查形容词。修饰名词practice应用形容词personal,表示“个人的”。故personally改为personal。 7.考查固定短语。根据短语make progress表示“取得进步”,progress是不可数名词。故删掉rapid前面的a。 8.考查副词。句意:此外,当我们做兼职工作时,我们可能会得到或多或少的工资来帮助我们的家庭。结合语境前后句子表示递进而不是转折,表示“此外,而且”应用besides/additionally/moreover/furethermore。句首字母要大写。故However改为Besides/Additionally/Moreover/Furthermore。 9.考查动词时态。描述客观事实用一般现在时,主语为I,谓语动词用原形。故suggested改为suggest。 10.考查名词的数。holiday为可数名词,根据our可知应用复数形式。故holiday改为holidays。  
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Xi made the praise in a letter 3. (write) to the students in Beijing’s Bayi School on Saturday. A small satellite designed and developed by them 4. (send) into space last Wednesday at Taiyuan Satellite Launch (发射) Center 5. it was designed to operate in orbit (轨道) for 180 days.

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1.A.felt B.lost C.struggled D.saw

2.A.small B.upset C.strong D.determined

3.A.well B.still C.again D.alone

4.A.running B.passing C.shooting D.struggling

5.A.studied B.expected C.improved D.practiced

6.A.title B.prize C.reward D.scholarship

7.A.good B.brave C.active D.careful

8.A.lack B.block C.count D.appear

9.A.guided B.watched C.preferred D.encouraged

10.A.faith B.peace C.victory D.profession

11.A.sunk B.buried C.covered D.dropped

12.A.up B.away C.back D.around

13.A.coach B.judge C.teacher D.captain

14.A.sent B.offered C.promised D.suggested

15.A.excited B.worried C.disappointed D.frightened

16.A.cruel B.strict C.unfair D.wrong

17.A.cause B.power C.value D.pressure

18.A.really B.entirely C.gradually D.naturally

19.A.voted B.admitted C.appointed D.introduced

20.A.joined in B.gone through C.benefited from D.longed for

 

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Having a hobby helps you relax and get away from the routines of school.3. You really need this well deserved one, too! It gives you focus, self dependence, confidence and builds your personality. This is an opportunity to lose yourself in an enjoyable activity, away from the pressure of school, so at the end of it, you feel relaxed and yet, mentally charged.

Your hobby defines you.4.And it also shows you what you are good at, and how far you can go, when you apply yourself.

5..For a hobby is: Happiness: something which you look forward to doing. Opportunity: to nurture and develop your special and unique skills and celebrate them. Believe in yourself: makes you understand your strong advantages and improves your confidence. Best in you: brings out your best—for in each one of us there is a best that is only ours. YOU gives you a unique character, and makes you YOU!

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B. It gives you a break.

C. It proves your ability.

D. Hobbies show your character.

E. It shows your special skills.

F. It could be collecting something.

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Despite what it promises, GM technology actually has not increased the production potential    of any corp. In fact, studies show that the most widely grown GM crop. GM soybeans, has suffered reduced productivity. For instance, a report than analysed nearly two decades of research on mojor GM food crops shows that GM engineering has failed to significantly increase US crop production.

Something else, however, has been on the rise, While GM seeds are expensive, GM companies tell farmers that they will make good profits by saving money on pesticides(杀虫剂). On the contrary, US government data show that GM crops in the US have produced an overall increase in pesticide use compared to traditional crops. “The promise was that you could use less chemicals and boost production. But nether is true,” said Bill Christison, President of the US National Farm Coalition.

At the same time, the authors of the book World Hunger: Twelve Myths argue that there actually is more than enough food in the world and that the hunger crisis is not caused by production, but by problems in food distribution and politics. These indeed deserve our efforts and money. Meanwhile, the rise in food prices results from the increased use of crops for fuel rather than food, according to a 2008 World Bank report.

As a matter of fact, scientists see better ways to feed the world. Another World Bank report concluded that GM crops have little to offer to the challenges of worldwide poverty and hunger, because better ways out are available, among which “green” farming is supposed to be the first choice.

1.The author develops the second paragraph mainly      .

A.by classification B.by comparison

C.by example D.by process

2.What does the underlined word “boost ” in the third paragraph probably mean?

A.Control. B.Evaluate C.Obtain. D.Increase.

3.GM companies promise farmers that they will benefit from ______________.

A.practicing “green” farming B.use of less chemicals

C.fair distribution of their crops D.using more crops for fuel

4.Which of the following best describes the attitude of the author towards GM technology?

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Celebrity clothing lines aren’t a completely new phenomenon, but in the past they were typically aimed at the ordinary consumers, and limited to a few TV actresses. Today they’re started by first-class stars whose products enjoy equal fame with some world top brands. The most successful start-ups have been those by celebrities with specific personal style. As celebrities become more and more experienced at the market, they expand their production scale rapidly, covering almost all the products of daily life.

However, for every success story, there’s a related warning tale of a celebrity who overvalued his consumer appeal. No matter how famous the product’s origin is, if it fails to impress consumers with its own qualities it begins to resemble an exercise in self-promotional marketing. And once the initial(最初的) attention dies down, consumer interest might fade, loyalty(忠诚) returning to tried-and-true labels.

Today, celebrities face even more severe embarrassment. The pop-cultural circle might be bigger than ever, but its rate of turnover has speeded up as well. Each misstep threatens to reduce a celebrity’s shelf life, and the same newspaper or magazine that once brought him fame has no problem picking him to pieces when the opportunity appears. Still, the ego’s(自我的) potential for expansion is limitless. Having already achieved great wealth and public recognition, many celebrities see fashion as the next frontier to be conquered. As the saying goes, success and failure always go hand in hand. Their success as designers might last only a short time, but fashion—like celebrity—has always been temporary.

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A.seldom put models on the cover

B.no longer put models on the cover

C.need not worry about celebrities’ market potential

D.judge the market potential of every celebrity correctly

2.A change in the consumer market can be found today that        .

A.price rather than brand name is more concerned

B.producers prefer models to celebrities for advertisements

C.producers prefer TV actresses to film stars for advertisements

D.quality rather than the outside of products is more concerned

3.The underlined sentence in Paragraph 4 indicates that any wrong step will possibly        .

A.decrease the popularity of a celebrity and the sales of his products

B.damage the image of a celebrity in the eyes of the general public

C.cut short the artistic career of a celebrity in show business

D.influence the price of a celebrity’s products

4.The passage is mainly about        .

A.celebrity and personal style B.celebrity and market potential

C.celebrity and fashion design D.celebrity and clothing industry

 

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