Question

假定你是李华，是你校音乐节的组织者之一。请你用英语给美国笔友Mike写一封邮件，请他介绍一下他们学校的音乐活动，并对你校音乐的组织提出建议。

注意:1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Dear Mike,

How is everything going?

Our school will hold a music festival next month. I am one of the organizers. The task is a bit difficult because it is the first time that I have organized such an event.

You told me every year some interesting music events are held in your school. I know you are a music lover and have organized many music events. Would you please introduce some to me? Besides, could you give me some suggestions about how to organize my school’s music festival?

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，请他介绍一下他们学校的音乐活动，并对你校音乐的组织提出建议。第二，人称为第一、二人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，问候。第二段，介绍一下自己学校的音乐活动。第三段，请他介绍一下他们学校的音乐活动，并对你校音乐的组织提出建议。第四段，期望回复。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: hold， organizer，event， introduce， suggestions ，a music festival ，next month，interesting music events，music lover，music festival.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: It is the first time that句型The task is a bit difficult because it is the first time that I have organized such an event.省略that的宾语从句You told me every year some interesting music events are held in your school. how引导的宾语从句 could you give me some suggestions about how to organize my school’s music festival.

第五步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。