Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today, I would like to share with you some ways to study English. First, you were supposed to read something in English, such as reading one or two pages of a novel appeals to you each day. Second, you may find helpful to watch English films. It help you to practise your listening, and makes learn English more interesting. Third, you should work hardly on your English writing by keeping an English diary. Besides focusing on listening or writing skills, you should also take every opportunities to speak English in and after class. On this way, you can use English every day and improve your fluency. I have been doing all these things, so I have made great progress in learning English.

Answer

1.were→are

2.appeals前添加that/which或appeals→appealing

3.find后添加it

4.help→helps

5.learn→learning

6.hardly→hard

7.or→and

8.opportunities→opportunity

9.On→In

10.去掉a

【解析】

这是一篇说明文。主要说明了一些学习英语的方法。

1.考查时态。结合文章上下文可知全文时态为一般现在时，主语为you，谓语动词应用复数形式。故将were改为are。

2.考查定语从句/非谓语动词。此处可理解为定语从句修饰先行词novel，且从句缺少做appeals to you的主语，指代物应用that/which；也可理解为appeal在句中作非谓语动词，appealing to you为后置定语修饰novel。故appeals前添加that/ which或appeals改为appealing。

3.考查代词。find后跟it作形式宾语，真正的宾语为to watch English films。故find后添加it。

4.考查主谓一致。全文时态为一般现在时，主语为It，故谓语动词应用第三人称单数。故help改为helps。

5.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知learn在句中作非谓语动词，且learning English 在句中做make的宾语，故用动词-ing形式。故learn改为learning。

6.考查副词。修饰动词work 应用副词hard，且hardly意为“几乎不”，hard意为“努力地”。故hardly改为hard。

7.考查连词。句意：除了注重听和写的技能，你还应该抓住每一个机会在课上和课后说英语。此处表示“和”这个语义应用连词and。故or改为and。

8.考查名词。不定代词every后应使用名词的单数。故opportunities改为opportunity。

9.考查介词。根据短语in this way表示“用这种方法”。故On改为In。

10.考查冠词。短语make great progress表示“取得巨大进步”，progress是不可数名词。故去掉a。