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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每句错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ʌ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Millions of people traveled to Italy every year. It's the third mostly popular country in Europe for foreign visitors. Why do people travel to Italy? They love its fashion, food, art, buildings or history. There are a lot things to see in Italy and Rome is a must during you visit. First, you can see the treasures in its wonderful museums. Before that, plan to visit the Trevi Fountain. Remembering to throw a coin in the fountain and make two wishes. The first one can be anything. The second is to return back to the city one day. Then buy an ice cream make in a special way from one of the nearby shop. It s delicious!

 

【解析】 本文是一篇说明文。意大利是旅游胜地,意大利旅游的原因有诸多的因素。 第一处:考查时态。句意:每年有数百万人到意大利旅游。根据句中的every year可知,句子用一般现在时,故将traveled改为travel。 第二处:考查形容词最高级。句意:它是欧洲第三大最受外国游客欢迎的国家。根据句意可知,the +序数词+most+形容词,是形容词最高级的一种组成形式,而mostly是副词,意为“主要地”,与题意不符,故将mostly改为most。 第三处:考查并列连词。句意:他们喜欢那里的时尚、美食、艺术、建筑和历史。根据句意可知,fashion, food, art, buildings, history是并列关系,而非选择关系,故将or改为and。 第四处:考查固定搭配。句意:意大利有很多值得一看的东西,罗马是你旅游的必去之地。根据句意可知,things是名词复数,a lot意为“非常”相当于副词,不能修饰名词,a lot of意为“许多”其后加名词复数,故在lot后加of。 第五处:考查代词。句意:意大利有很多值得一看的东西,罗马是你旅游的必去之地。分析句子结构可知,visit做名词用,而you是人称代词,此处用物主代词,故将you改为your。 第六处:考查介词。句意:之后,计划参观特莱维喷泉。根据句意和语境可知,此处和前文有时间先后顺序的关系,先参观博物馆,后去参观喷泉,故将Before改为After。 第七处:考查祈使句。句意:记得往喷泉里扔一枚硬币,许两个愿望。分析句子结构可知,remembering不能做谓语动词,再根据句意,此句是动词原形开头,是祈使句,故将Remembering改为Remember。 第八处:考查介词。句意:二是总有一天要回到自己的城市。根据句意可知,return意为“返回”,其后不用再加介词,故将back去掉。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。句意:然后在附近的商店买一个特别制作的冰淇淋。分析句子结构可知,make in a special way from one of the nearby shop做定语修饰an ice cream,又因an ice cream和make之间是被动关系,故用过去分词,故将make改为made。 第十处:考查名词的数。句意:然后在附近的商店买一个特别制作的冰淇淋。根据语境可知,此处并没有特指是哪一家商店,故用shop的复数形式,故将shop改为shops。  
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