Question

假设你是南阳一中的李华,英国友好学校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件：

(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一)；

(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；

(3)希望从中有何收获。

注意:(1)词数不少于 100;(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Chris,

I'm Li Hua, a student at Nanyang No.1 Middle School. Word comes that you would like to hear our opinions with regard to which topic to cover in your lecture concerning western art and I feel an urge to make my voice heard.

As a music lover, I’m greatly fond of classic music; as a consequence, I would appreciate it if you could talk about something related to western classical music such as its origin and developing process. In addition, some representative figures and their masterpieces are also expected to be introduced. I am convinced that your lecture will enrich my knowledge about western classical music and develop students’ interest in western art.

I would feel honored if you could take my suggestions into account. Looking forward to your excellent lecture. May you have a good time in our school.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。写一封邮件给出活动建议。

第一步：审题。假设你是南阳一中的李华,英国友好学校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。

要求：1.表达写信目的

2.你的意见

1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一)；

2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；

3)希望从中有何收获。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

Word comes that…; with regard to; be fond of; as a consequence; I would appreciate it if…; in addition; be expected to do; develop students’interest in; take my suggestions into account; Looking forward to your excellent lecture.

第三步：连词成句

1. Word comes that you would like to hear our opinions with regard to which topic to cover in your lecture concerning western art.

2. I’m greatly fond of classic music.

3. I would appreciate it if you could talk about something related to western classical music such as its origin and developing process.

4. In addition, some representative figures and their masterpieces are also expected to be introduced.

5. I am convinced that your lecture will enrich my knowledge about western classical music and develop students’interest in western art.

6. I would feel honored if you could take my suggestions into account.

7. Looking forward to your excellent lecture.

第四步：润色修改

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。