Question

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Betty最近在学习汉语，她给你发来一封邮件，询问如何提高汉语口语水平。请给她回一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 提出建议（至少两点）；

2. 表达祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Dear Betty,

I am more than delighted to know you have been learning Chinese recently. I would like to offer you some advice on how to improve your spoken Chinese.

As far as I’m concerned, you can listen to some Chinese radio programs to improve your pronunciation. You can also join a Chinese learning club, where you can practice spoken Chinese with other members. Besides, you can choose to watch Chinese TV programs on the Internet, which will help you better understand Chinese culture, thus benefiting your Chinese learning.

I wish you great pleasure in learning Chinese. And I’d be glad to help you learn Chinese.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向朋友提出有关如何提高汉语口语水平的建议并表达祝愿。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 表示很高兴得知朋友在学习汉语，并表示愿意提出建议；2. 提出一些如何学好汉语口语的建议（例如：收听中文电台节目；加入学中文俱乐部）；3.表达祝愿。

第二步: 列提纲 （重点词组）

be more than delighted to; offer some advice on; spoken Chinese; Chinese radio programs; pronunciation; join a club; watch TV programs; on the Internet; benefit learning; pleasure; be glad to

第三步：连词成句

1. I am more than delighted to know you have been learning Chinese recently.

2. I would like to offer you some advice on how to improve your spoken Chinese.

3. You can also join a Chinese learning club, where you can practice spoken Chinese with other members.

4. You can choose to watch Chinese TV programs on the Internet, which will help you better understand Chinese culture, thus benefiting your Chinese learning.

5. I wish you great pleasure in learning Chinese.

6. I’d be glad to help you learn Chinese

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改