Question

假如你是李华，上周末你和美国网友Sarah在MSN上交流了暑期旅游的打算，且得知Sarah有来中国旅游的想法。请你根据以下要点给他回封邮件：

1. 告知自己的旅游详细计划（时间、地点、方式、住宿等）；2. 邀请Sarah一起旅行。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2. 可适当发挥，以使文章内容充实、连贯；

3. 信的格式与开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sarah，

I am writing to tell you my detailed traveling plan this summer.

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Sarah,

I am writing to tell you my detailed traveling plan this summer. With my parents’ permission, I’ve decided to cycle to Lhasa with my two classmates.

We will first take a train to Chengdu, which is the starting point of the Chuanzang Road, and then begin our ride there. We plan to ride for about 12 days, enjoying the beautiful scenes along the road. We will live in the Youth Hotel in order to save some money. Staying in Lhasa for about 3 days, we are going to visit the Potala Palace and also see the sunset on the Potala Square.

It is sure to be a special experience because we have not gone so far alone without parents nearby. I hope you can come to China and join us.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。

第一步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，上周末你和美国网友Sarah在MSN上交流了暑期旅游的打算，且得知Sarah有来中国旅游的想法。请你根据以下要点给他回封邮件：1. 告知自己的旅游详细计划（时间、地点、方式、住宿等）；2. 邀请Sarah一起旅行。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：permission, decide to, starting point, beautiful scenes, in order to, the Potala Palace, Potala Square.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。