Question

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Last October, I took an early morning hike in the MadisonValley in southwest Montana. Knowing that bears are common throughout the area and not wanting to surprise one, I cried out, “Hey, bear!” every 30 seconds.

About three miles in, I stepped out into a grassland and shouted again. A few more steps and I spotted a grizzly bear with her cubs(幼崽) on the track at the upper end of the grassland. The bear saw me right away, and they all ran up the track. But then she stopped, turned, and charged straight for me. I yelled so she would know I was human and hopefully turned back. No such luck. I gave her a full charge of bear spray at about 25 feet. Her rush carried her right through the orange mist and onto me.

I dived face-first into the dirt and wrapped my arms around the back of my neck for protection. She was on top of me, biting my arms, shoulders and backpack. The force of each bite was like a sledgehammer(大锤) with teeth. Over and over she bit me. After what felt like hours but was merely minutes, she disappeared.

Shocked, I carefully picked myself up. I was able to walk, so I half hiked and half jogged back down the track toward my truck, three miles below. I had numerous bleeding wounds on my arms and shoulders, but I knew I would survive.

About five or ten minutes down the track, I heard a sound and turned. It was the grizzly bear down at 30 feet. I was lucky after the first attack, but could I survive a second?

Again I protected the back of my neck with my arms and kept tight against the ground to protect my face and eyes. She struck violently down on top of me and bit my shoulders and arms. My hands instantly went numb, and the wrists and fingers were limp and unusable. The sudden pain made me draw back and breathe noisily.

注意：

1. 所续写的短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

I had to find the ways to defeat the bear.

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Paragraph 2:

I raised my head and looked around.

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Answer

I had to find the ways to defeat the bear. I was keeping tight against the ground when suddenly I remembered I had another bear spray. I knew I couldn’t move or make a sound again, so I remained motionless and waited for a good chance to fight back. After several more seconds of silence, the bear seemingly lost patience. Hardly had she taken another bite, I gathered strength and tried to frighten the bear away, using the spray. And then she was gone.

I raised my head and looked around. No bear. I stood up and moved down the track again. Forty-five minutes later, I got into my truck and drove 17 miles to a hospital. It took doctors eight hours to treat the wounds. Most wounds were on my arms and shoulders. A five-inch cut along the side of my head will leave an ugly scar. The next day, I woke up with the wound in the shape of claws across my lower back where the bear had stood on me. Not my best day, but I’m alive.

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知，文章记叙了作者一次清晨徒步旅行时遇到了一头熊，并被熊攻击的事情。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我必须找到打败熊的方法。所以后文应该是讲述作者如何想出打败熊的方法，并成功把熊吓跑的经过；第二段开头是：我抬起头，环顾四周。本段应该写熊走后作者来到医院接受救治的经过，描述了作者受伤的情况。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。