Question

假定你是李华。近日，某省博物馆遭投诉，一观众留言：“……不给吃东西,又不让孩子跑，工作人员管得也太多了吧！”这一做法，引起了网友热议。某英语报社现以What does a rule mean to you?为题征稿。请你写一篇100词左右的文章，谈一谈你对礼仪规范(etiquette)的认识。

注意:1.标题和开头已为你写岀，不计入总数；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

What does a rule mean to you?

It' s reported that a parent complains about a ban on food and running at the museum, saying the museum is “asking too much of children”.

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Answer

What does a rule mean to you?

It’s reported that a parent complains about a ban on food and running at the museum, saying the museum is “asking too much of children”.

The case led to heated discussions among netizens over museum etiquette. Needless to say, the main purpose of museums is to preserve cultural and historical artifacts, and rules are made to protect the precious exhibits. In this sense, eating in the museum is forbidden as food and drinks might contaminate the artworks.

While some may worry that too many rules would kill the “pleasant experience for children”, museum rules should be strictly observed and children should not be treated as an exception.

Of course, museums should strengthen publicity and education of museum etiquette as well as try to develop some interactive activities for children.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生写一篇文章，谈一谈对礼仪规范的认识。

第一步：审题

体裁：议论文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.提出话题（heated discussions）

2.博物馆规定的目的--保护文物（preserve cultural and historical artifacts）

3.对博物馆礼仪规范的认识（should be strictly observed）

4.建议（develop some interactive activities for children）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

lead to; heated discussions over sth; needless to say; the purpose of; be observed; be treated as; as well as

第三步：连词成句

1. The case led to heated discussions among netizens over museum etiquette.

2. Needless to say, the main purpose of museums is to preserve cultural and historical artifacts, and rules are made to protect the precious exhibits.

3. While some may worry that too many rules would kill the “pleasant experience for children”, museum rules should be strictly observed and children should not be treated as an exception.

4. Of course, museums should strengthen publicity and education of museum etiquette as well as try to develop some interactive activities for children.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改