Question

假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示歉意;

2.说明原因;

3.另约时间。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear Bob,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示歉意;

2.说明原因;

3.另约时间。

第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为两段。第一段，表示歉意；说明原因。第二段，另约时间。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: attend an important class meeting ，cause you too much trouble，set out ，read and select books，be available.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: 省略that的宾语从句I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. if引导的条件状语从句 If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:firstly ,secondly ,thirdly.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。