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请修改下面的短文。短文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及...

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;

2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

3. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

Last year, I join a volunteer club to help those people in need. The first activity I participated was to hold a charity sale to collect the money and donations, and then take it to a primary school into deep mountains. The activity was successfully as most of the students supported this charity, donated the money and study materials with kindness. At the weekends, we took the donations to the primary school, which we saw the smiles on children faces, and their poor study circumstances. It was the experiences what made me feel the responsibility to make some differences to their life.

 

1.join→joined 2.participated后添加in 3.it→them 4.successfully→successful 5.donated→donating 6.去掉the 7.which→where 8.children→children’s 9.what→that 10.differences→difference 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。主要记叙了去年作者参加了一个志愿者俱乐部来帮助那些需要帮助的人,以及举办义卖,筹集善款的经过。 1.考查时态。由时间状语 last year 可知,此应用一般过去时。故join改为joined。 2.考查动词。分析句子可知, I participated 是定语从句,修饰activity,从句中作宾语, participate 为不及物动词,后接宾语时其后要加in,。故participated后添加in。 3.考查代词。代词指代的是前面的 the money and donations,故用them。故it改为them。 4.考查形容词。根据上文was可知此处作表语,故应用形容词successful,表示“成功的”。故successfully改为successful。 5.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知donate在句中作非谓语动词,the students 与 donate 之间是主谓关系,故应用现在分词。故donated改为donating。 6.考查冠词。句意:这项活动是成功的,因为大多数学生支持这项慈善事业,好心地捐赠钱和学习材料。money为不可数名词,此处表示泛指,不加定冠词。故去掉the。 7.考查定语从句。本句为定语从句修饰先行词the primary school,且先行词在从句中作地点状语,应用关系副词where。故将 which改为where。 8.考查名词的格。此处children与faces构成所属关系,应用名词所有格。故children改为children’s。 9.考查强调句。分析句子结构可知此处为强调句“it is/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他”,被强调部分为the experiences,故应用that。故what改为that。 10.考查固定搭配。根据短语make some difference to表示“对……有影响”。故differences改为difference。  
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The researchers involved argue that the new 8. (finding) reveal many theories put forward by climate scientists9. (explain) the rise in temperatures, including changes in solar activity. The current period of climate change is mainly down to humans, they insist. Natural causes, they say, are10. (simple) not sufficient to explain the warming scene over the last century and a half.

 

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2.A.mess B.hurry C.way D.week

3.A.compulsory B.complex C.practical D.strange

4.A.scheduled B.encouraged C.reminded D.forced

5.A.afforded B.intended C.offered D.promised

6.A.experience B.observe C.confirm D.finish

7.A.seated B.frightened C.unnoticed D.relaxed

8.A.roads B.prices C.storms D.crowds

9.A.arranged B.avoided C.missed D.rewarded

10.A.Fortunately B.Merely C.Normally D.Particularly

11.A.disturbing B.working C.appearing D.circulating

12.A.criterion B.deadline C.trouble D.chance

13.A.parked B.exchanged C.evaluated D.discovered

14.A.introducing B.describing C.comforting D.expressing

15.A.payment B.program C.support D.difficulty

16.A.cautious B.suitable C.content D.willing

17.A.still B.even C.ever D.yet

18.A.office B.hospital C.car D.airport

19.A.made B.seen C.driven D.proved

20.A.in nature B.in person C.in secret D.in return

 

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1.What made shoppers in different countries crazy buying?

A.The approach of 2020 New Year’s Day.

B.The shortage of resources and supplies in their nations.

C.Their concern about the virus.

D.The discount from supermarkets.

2.What does the underlined word in Paragraph 2 refer to?

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3.What is the reason for this behavior according to expert?

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B.People are wiser in making decisions.

C.People think no one needs the supplies.

D.People do not believe what others said.

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A.People should not panic over the virus.

B.More people die from car accidents.

C.People buy little when they go to the stores.

D.We should panic about the situation.

 

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1.Where is the carbon in rivers originally from?

A.The atmosphere. B.The rocks.

C.The acid rain. D.The upstream areas.

2.Why is human engineering mentioned in Paragraph 3?

A.To show how important to life carbon is.

B.To explain how necessary it is to build dams.

C.To show how a natural process is interrupted.

D.To explain how humans fight global warming.

3.What does the author want to convey in the last paragraph?

A.We’d better move upstream to live.

B.We should protect plants along rivers.

C.We’d better seek more help from plants.

D.We should be cautious about river management.

4.What is the best title for the text?

A.What Humans Do with Rivers

B.How Rivers’ Transporting Carbon Counts

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D.How Living Downstream Affects the Earth

 

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