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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.

 

1. very→so 2. regarded→regard 3. has→is 4. 去掉so 5. This→It 6. Moreover→However 7. spend→spending 8. for→to 9. properly→proper 10. important→importance 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。就计算机技术的发展,一些学生认为网上有很多信息并且网上交流很方便,持赞成态度。而一些学生认为网上有不好的信息,并且学生玩很多网游对学习和健康都不利,持反对态度。 第一处: 考查结果状语从句。句意:当今,计算机技术发展如此迅速,以至于网络已变得越来越流行。结果状语从句中,“如此……以至于……”应翻译为“so/such…that…”,并且so后使用形容词或副词,such后跟名词结构。句中fast(快的)的形容词,故将very改为so。 第二处: 考查一般现在时。句意:一些学生认为它是好的助手。由本文第一句话中的develops可知,本文对于科技发展的描述使用的是一般现在时,所以第二句话也应使用一般现在时。句子主语是复数意义,故将regarded改为regard。 第三处:考查there be句型。句意:因为网上有很多信息,所以你不用再图书馆努力查询,用很短的时间就可以在网上搜到你需要的任何信息。There be句型可表示“有……”,there不能与has连用,故将has改为is。 第四处:考查原因状语从句的连词。句意同上。由于这个句首出现了表达原因的连词Because,所以第二个分句前不能再用so,故将so去掉。 第五处:考查it作形式主语。句意:用网络和别人交谈也是很方便的。根据句意,不定式to talk with others by using the Internet是句子的主语,所以句首应使用it作形式主语。故将This改为It。 第六处:考查副词。句意:然而,其它一些学生认为网上有一些对学生不好的信息。根据句意,这句话与前几句话之间是转折关系,Some students与other students对于网络的发展持有不同的态度。moreover意为“此外,而且”,不能表达转折关系,故将Moreover改为However。 第七处: 考查动名词作主语。句意:另外,花很多时间玩游戏不仅对学习有坏的影响,对身体也是有害的。根据句意,“spend too much time playing games”在句中作主语,但是动词短语不能作主语,所以应将其改为动名词形式。故将spend改为spending。 第八处:考查介词。句意同上。“伤害……”应翻译为“do harm to… =do…harm”,根据句意,对健康有害,故将for改为to。 第九处: 考查形容词。句意:因此,我们应该合理利用网络。“合理的”用在use前,作定语,应用形容词形式。故将properly改为proper。 第十处:考查名词。句意:把好的植物和野草分开是非常重要的。“做……是重要的”应翻译为It’s of great importance to do…,由于“重要的”位于介词of后作宾语,所以应用名词形式。故将important改为importance。  
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