Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

During the National Day holiday, my parents and I paid a visit my grandparents by train. There was a large number of people and the train was crowded, but everyone helped those who had lots of baggages and behaved politely. Along the way, we enjoyed beautifully views. At the first, we saw one hill after another. Then what came into view were fields with green crops. After a six-hour trip, they arrived at our grandparents’ house. Exhausted although I felt, I was happy to see my grandparents, which I hadn’t seen for a long time. It’s really an excited trip because it was the first time that I had taken so a long-distance train.

Answer

1.paid 后添加to

2.was→were

3.baggages→baggage

4. beautifully →beautiful

5.At the first中去掉the

6. they→we

7. although→though/as

8.which→who/whom

9.excited→exciting

10.so→such

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。本文主要讲述作者和父母乘火车去看望祖父母，一路上看到了许多美景，虽然累，但这是作者第一次乘这么远的火车。

1.考查介词。根据短语pay a visit to意为“参观，拜访”。故paid后添加to。

2.考查主谓一致。there be句型中，be动词的人称和数与be后的主语保持一致，此处主语是a large number of people，谓语用复数。故was改为were。

3.考查名词。baggage是不可数名词，没有复数形式。故baggages改为baggage。

4.考查形容词。views是名词，要用形容词beautiful修饰，表示“美丽的”。故beautifully 改为beautiful。

5.考查冠词。根据短语at first表示“首先”，中间不需要冠词。故At the first中去掉the。

6.考查代词。句意：经过6个小时的旅行，我们到达了祖父母家。此处表示“我们”做主语应用代词we。故they改为we。

7.考查让步状语从句。句意：虽然我很累，但我很高兴看到我很久没见过的祖父母。此句使用了不完全倒装形式，although引导让步状语时不需倒装，不能将句子成分提前。as引导让步状语从句必须倒装，though可倒可不倒。故although改为though/as。

8.考查定语从句。此处为非限定性定语从句修饰先行词grandfather，指人，不能用which，先行词在从句中做宾语，应用关系代词who/whom引导。故which改为who/whom。

9.考查形容词。此处修饰名词trip，应用-ing结尾形容词，表示“令人激动的旅行”。故excited改为exciting。

10.考查形容词。such修饰名词，so修饰形容词，train为名词。故so改为such。