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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用删除符号(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day when I was walking home, I had heard a noise behind me. It was a pretty dog, and he followed me home. Dad was surprised, saying she looked as the Smiths’ pet dog. Realizing she was very tired, I gave her a bath but kept her company until she felt comfortably.

A big surprise came next morning, when I found her with four little cute puppies! I was in great excite. Before long Dad led Mrs. Smith in, that thanked us for taking care of the dog. She asked whether I wanted to keep one of them — I was thrilling for the sudden joy!

 

1.去掉had 2.he→she 3.as→like 4.but→and 5.comfortably→comfortable 6.next之前加the 7.excite→excitement 8.that→who 9.dog→dogs 10.thrilling→thrilled 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者无意中收留了史密斯家的狗,第二天发现她生了小狗。而当史密斯太太前来将狗接走感谢并询问我是否想要收养一只小狗时,作者感到了无比的喜悦。 1.考查时态。句意:有一天,当我走回家的时候,我听到身后有响声。分析可知,文章为记叙文讲述过去发生的事情,应是一般过去时。故将had去掉。 2.考查人称代词。句意:这是一只漂亮的狗,它跟着我回家。结合语境可知,这里的狗是一位“狗妈妈”,且呼应后文的人称she。故将he改为she。 3.考查介词。句意:爸爸很惊讶,说她看起来像史密斯家的宠物狗。look like,看起来像,固定结构。故将as改为like。 4.考查连词。句意:意识到她很累,我给她洗了个澡,陪着她直到她感觉舒服为止。分析可知,前后动作gave her a bath和kept her company之间应是并列顺承关系,应用并列连词and连接。故将but改为and。 5.考查形容词。句意:意识到她很累,我给她洗了个澡,陪着她直到她感觉舒服为止。felt为感官系动词,之后接形容词作表语。故将comfortably改为comfortable。 6.考查冠词。句意:第二天早上,当我发现她带着四只可爱的小狗时,我大吃一惊。结合语境可知“第二天早上”应是特指事件发生的第二天早上,之前应用定冠词the。故在next之前加the。 7.考查名词。句意:我兴奋极了。great为形容词,之后接名词。故将excite改为excitement。 8.考查定语从句。句意:不久,爸爸把史密斯太太领了进来,她感谢我们照顾狗。分析可知,此处“that thanked us for taking care of the dog(dogs)”为之前名词Mrs. Smith的非限制性定语从句,先行词在从句作主语,应用关系代词who引导。故将that改为who。 9.考查名词。句意:不久,爸爸把史密斯太太领了进来,她感谢我们照顾狗。结合语境可知,这里的“狗”应指“狗妈妈”和刚出生的“狗宝宝”,应用名词复数。故将dog改为dogs。 10.考查形容词。句意:她问我是否想养其中的一个——我为这突如其来的喜悦而激动不已!分析可知,thrilling和thrilled均为形容词,-ing结尾的形容词多修饰事物;-ed结尾形容词多修饰人。这里的主语为“I”,应用-ed结尾的形容词。故将thrilling改为thrilled。
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13.A.doubted B.required C.supported D.regretted

14.A.keeping B.clearing C.studying D.crossing

15.A.even B.still C.once D.yet

16.A.warning B.doubting C.stressing D.ignoring

17.A.appropriate B.unfair C.extra D.informal

18.A.hold B.exit C.treasure D.fix

19.A.spare B.change C.admit D.finish

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Earth’s climate is closely related to the carbon cycle. We all know about the essential role of plants in consuming carbon dioxide, but do we know enough about rivers? Changing the chemistry and the course of rivers may have significant impacts on how they transport carbon. Remember: wherever we live, we all live downstream.

1.Where is the carbon in rivers originally from?

A.The atmosphere. B.The rocks.

C.The acid rain. D.The upstream areas.

2.Why is human engineering mentioned in Paragraph 3?

A.To show how important to life carbon is.

B.To explain how necessary it is to build dams.

C.To show how a natural process is interrupted.

D.To explain how humans fight global warming.

3.What does the author want to convey in the last paragraph?

A.We’d better move upstream to live.

B.We should protect plants along rivers.

C.We’d better seek more help from plants.

D.We should be cautious about river management.

4.What is the best title for the text?

A.What Humans Do with Rivers

B.How Rivers’ Transporting Carbon Counts

C.What the Carbon Cycle Means to Us

D.How Living Downstream Affects the Earth

 

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A.A comet always follows a storm.

B.London was under an approaching threat.

C.London was prepared for the disease.

D.The woman was the beginning of the disease.

2.What do the Mootes say about London during the Great Plague?

A.The city remained organized.

B.The plague spared the rich areas.

C.The people tried a lot in vain.

D.The majority fled and thus survived.

3.Why do the Mootes focus on the nine individuals?

A.They were famous people in history.

B.They all managed to survive the Plague.

C.They provided vivid stories of humanity.

D.They united by thinking and acting as one.

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