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Today is our graduation day, it marks the end of our senior high school but the beginning of a new life for all of us. We supposed to feel joyful on such an unforgettable day and being full of hope for the future. I am deeply moving by these things on the day, and I feel more, either. It is at this moment that I realize that I have to say good-bye to my school, my classmates and my teacher. The thing I desire to do most is to express how thankfully I am to my teachers and parents. I will always remember that what they have done for me. I will thank them from the bottom of your heart.
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Auckland, the capital city of New Zealand, is the largest and most populous (人口众多的) urban area in the country.
When 1.( plan) a trip to New Zealand, most people skip over Auckland as a destination. Everyone floods to Queenstown, or heads out2.( spend) time enjoying themselves in nature. However, as anyone who has visited it knows, there are even 3. ( many) things to do in Auckland, compared with those in Queenstown. All of these things make4. a great destination for all travelers.5. you are a backpacker, you will in, particular enjoy the huge range of free and cheap things to do in Auckland, especially in a country which is known6. its high living cost.
The city's trendy neighborhoods can7.(explore) on foot, and the skyline can be viewed from the water for the cheap price of a ferry ticket.8.( particular), you will have the chance to taste9.(variety) of snacks and the city doesn't shy away from a good happy hour. Give yourself10. couple of days to enjoy it, and check out some of our favorite things to do in Auckland. Auckland, you shouldn't miss it!
Do you know what is the most beautiful sound in the world?
Being in the same dormitory in university, one of my classmates, who was from a big city, had never______his parents. He said that there was no phone at home and it was OK for. him ,to write to his parents. We were_____ - he lived in a modern city, why not_______ a telephone at home?
After the summer vacation, he often went to bed to listen to a tape_____, which was taken from his home. Sometimes he was crying in______. We proposed to_____ his tape to listen to. However, he____. One time when he was out, we got the ___. After we listened to it, it seemed that there wasn't______ in it. We were puzzled and put it back under his pillow. In the coming of graduation, he told us that his parents were deaf and unable to____. To make a living； his parents_____ all hardships and never got others’ ____. For his study, his parents' paid much attention to creating the best conditions for him. He had to ____ his parents to go to university after their living condition was better. He often_____them, especially when the night fell. His____was from “Silent Love” of his parents. He taped the sound of their______. He listened to it every night, feeling his_____ being with him.
We were_____ . Care from family is like light to____our misfortune ,and_____love is the most beautiful sound in the world.
1.A.commented B.phoned C.contacted D.mentioned
2.A.surprised B.delighted C.excited D.interested
3.A.change B.select C.carry D.fix
4.A.eagerly B.patiently C.secretly D.casually
5.A.doubt B.sadness C.panic D.anger
6.A.borrow B.wipe C.record D.release
7.A.sighed B.nodded C.hesitated D.refused
8.A.pillow B.recorder C.telephone D.tape
9.A.something B.everything C.anything D.nothing
10.A.speak B.read C.see D.walk
11.A.forgot B.suffered C.overcame D.feared
12.A.blame B.abuse C.commitment D.respect
13.A.allow B.leave C.persuade D.abandon
14.A.missed B.accompanied C.upset D.misunderstood
15.A.achievement B.confidence C.kindness D.talent
16.A.singing B.quarreling C.breathing D.sobbing
17.A.friends B.roommates C.parents D.relatives
18.A.confused B.scared C.puzzled D.touched
19.A.put out B.settle down C.cast away D.take in
20.A.blind B.silent C.deep D.true
With college starting for freshmen across the country, now is the time to be thinking about money. 1..You have to make some serious decisions with what you have, so here we prepare some amazing tips to go with you.
●Keep your personal finances mobile
2.. Actually, in this case, youth of this generation are way luckier than their parents once were, because there are now a lot of convenient APPs on your smart phones that can give you real time images of your money and spending.
●Use your credit responsibly
My best financial advice for college students is to be smart with your first credit card. Ask the salespeople to explain all the terms to you and look for cards with no annual fee, good rewards, and of course, reasonable interest rates. Think twice before you make the final decision.3., especially if they tell you that :the offer is only good for that day.
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Occupying a position in your spare time is important because you can earn “spending money”. And your job can have an even bigger impact if it's one that allows you to do your homework. There are many on-campus jobs out there that allow you to sit down and have limited responsibilities.
●Network for your future career
Remember why you're in college十prepare yourself for the challenging future. You should work on your network by taking internships and getting into various kinds of organizations as much as possible. No money item could be more important than your network because the quickest way to secure a job is all about who you know.5.
A.Get a job, but a flexible one
B.Open the credit card to get the profit
C.Just do yourselves a favor and walk away
D.It is essential for you to pay your educational fee
E.Keeping accounts for oneself matters for all beginners
F.This will make you more money than opening a bank account
G.This will really be your first time to handle money on your own
More than 30 volunteers organized by the village Party committee were participating in a group effort to produce gauze (纱布) masks, alcohol liquid and sterilizing powder (消毒粉) at a factory in southwest China's Yunnan Province to help arm the fight against the novel coronavirus (新型冠状病毒). Some villagers also had given away their sewing machines for the production work at Yunnan Xiangsha Medical Material Company in Anning City.
Volunteers addressed the labor, shortage during the Spring Festival holiday at the factory, which had begun to produce on. Friday. They received body temperature checks and training before the work started, with volunteers able to use the sewing machines being more than 50 years old on average. Seventy-nine-year-old Chu Shudong, who had 30 years of tailoring experience, volunteered to repair the sewing machines.“I've not done tailoring for 20 years. I'm old and my eyesight is poor. I hope to do what I can here and make more masks so that people are protected, ”he said. The youngest volunteer, 22-year-old Bi Qiling, joined the: team. She's available because the new semester at her university in Beijing was delayed because of the novel coronavirus outbreak.
“With the volunteers, our production capacity is higher. We have 65 people, divided into two groups, and work on two shifts (轮班) a day. All the machines are working around the clock,”said Hang Kaijin, head of the factory, which has the ability to produce two tons of alcohol liquid and 200 kilograms of sterilizing power every day.
It sent its production information to the city government on a daily basis and the products were all allocated by the government.
1.What did villagers donate for the production?
A.Raw materials. B.Clean gauze.
C.Sewing machines. D.Alcohol liquid.
2.What can we know about the volunteers from paragraph 2?
A.The average age of the volunteers able to use sewing machines was over 50.
B.Chu Shudong, an experienced tailor at the age of 78, offered to do some sewing.
C.Volunteers having 30 years of tailoring experience should receive body temperature checks. .
D.Bi Qiling, a girl, was turned down by the university because of the novel coronavirus outbreak.
3.How did the volunteers work?
A.Most of the volunteers worked twice a day.
B.All of the volunteers. worked. 12 hours in the daytime.
C.Two groups of volunteers took turns to work 24 hours a day.
D.Volunteers were divided into two groups, each working 8 hours.
4.The act of the volunteers proved that____
A.great minds think alike B.more hands produce a stronger flame
C.two heads are better than one D.God helps those who help themselves .
An extreme drought is threatening South Africa's wildlife industry. Farmers are keeping fewer animals and vacationers are visiting in smaller numbers. Parts of the country have been affected by repeated years of hotter than normal weather and below average rainfall. The conditions have burned feeding grass and dried up watering holes. In 2015, the area saw the driest year on record. The agency Wildlife Ranching South Africa ( WRSA) collets data on more than 9,000 wildlife ranches ( 牧场) in the nation. It estimates that the Northern Cape Province has lost more than .two thirds of its game over the last three years. WRSA is talking to ranchers around the country to gather information on animal loss and the financial impact the drought is having.
WRSA Chief Adri Kitshoff-Botha told Reuters News Agency the drought has continued for some time. “In some areas we've seen it has been going on for six years, ”she said. The wildlife industry brings money to South Africa's economy through tourism, hunting, breeding and meat production. Hunting —the shooting of carefully chosen animals in particular—made $ 140 million in 2016, topping the list of the four mentioned, above, breeding ranking the least, though.
In the past, the lodge (度假区) was home to around 4,500 wild animals—including 35 different species from antelope to rhino. But it has lost around 1 ,000 animals because of the drought. Now, dead animals sit in old and unused mines on the edge of the property. “The lodge has seen its spending rise as it buys more feed for animals for the sake of the drought. At the same time, hunters are paying less, and fewer tourists are visiting because the animals are in poor condition over the past year,” said WRSA’s Kitshof-Botha. The drought has also hit other parts of South Africa. In Botswana, more than 100 elephants died in two months in 2019. Botswana is home to almost one-third of Africa's elephants.
1.Which is the indirect result of the drought?
A.Economy is barely declining. B.Feeding grass has been burned.
C.Watering holes have dried up. D.Vacationers are becoming fewer.
2.Which took the lead in South Africa's wildlife industry in 2016?
A.Hunting. B.Breeding.
C.Tourism. D.Meat production.
3.The lodge's expense is going up because_____
A.some local species need more attending in hot weather
B.the animals in poor condition are dying out in the drought
C.the lodge has to offer animals more food due to the drought
D.dead animals' bodies need to be buried in' old and unused mines
4.What does the passage mainly talk about?
A.South Africa's wildlife industry is under the threat of an extreme drought.
B.The rapid decreasing of national economy affects wildlife in South Africa.
C.Most wildlife ranchers in South Africa are suffering a lot from the drought.
D.Wildlife industry is playing a vital part in South Africa's national economy.
