Question

假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Johnson 对你所在城市广州地区正在实施的“垃圾分类”的活动很感兴趣，请你给 Johnson 写一封信，向他介绍“垃圾分类”的详情，要点如下：

1. 垃圾问题的现状;

2. 垃圾分类的意义;

3. 询问对方城市垃圾分类的情况。

注意：1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

参考词汇：垃圾分类 Rubbish Classification

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Answer

Dear Johnson,

I’m Li Hua. Knowing that you are interested in the activity named “Rubbish Classification”, now I am writing to tell you something about it.

As we know, rubbish is an unavoidable part of our life. Large amounts of rubbish, such as leftover food, waste paper, used plastic bottles and batteries are produced every day. However, dealing with rubbish has always been a big headache and rubbish is becoming a major environmental problem in our city. It is time that rubbish classification should be carried out in Guangzhou. Because, by classifying rubbish, we can recycle useful materials, save resources and reduce environmental pollution. Moreover, rubbish classification is a scientific and effective way to manage rubbish. Therefore, different dustbins have been placed in public places. Whenever we throw the rubbish, we are appealed to throw the rubbish into the right dustbins! We are trying to do our best and make a difference.

What about the good measures of dealing with rubbish in your city? Could you tell me more information?

Looking forward to your earlier reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求学生写一封信，介绍“垃圾分类”的情况。

第一步：

审题: 信件，介绍“垃圾分类”的情况。

人称：第一、三人称

时态： 一般现在时

结构： 总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明写信的目的，第二部分介绍“垃圾分类”的具体情况，第三部分询问对方城市垃圾分类的情况，希望早日得到回复。

要点：

1. 说明写信的目的

2．介绍“垃圾分类”的具体情况

①垃圾问题的现状：每天产生大量的垃圾，引起很大的环境问题

②垃圾分类的意义：回收有用的材料、节省资源、减少环境污染，是一种科学有效的处理垃圾的方法

③垃圾分类的具体做法：号召将不同类的垃圾扔进正确的垃圾桶

3．询问对方城市垃圾分类的情况，希望早日回复

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）

be interested in；unavoidable；large amounts of；such as；produce；deal with；environmental problem；classify；recycle；a scientific and effective way；throw the rubbish；appeal to；do one’s best；make a difference

第三步：连词成句

You are interested in the activity named “Rubbish Classification”.

Large amounts of rubbish, such as leftover food, waste paper, used plastic bottles and batteries are produced every day.

Dealing with rubbish has always been a big headache.

Rubbish is becoming a major environmental problem in our city.

Rubbish classification should be carried out in Guangzhou.

By classifying rubbish, we can recycle useful materials, save resources and reduce environmental pollution.

Rubbish classification is a scientific and effective way to manage rubbish.

Different dustbins have been placed in public places.

We are trying to do our best and make a difference.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。