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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线( ____ ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It delighted me that my school will start a winter camp, which includes a variety of course, such as cooking, swimming, and giving first aid. To be honesty, I am interested in the course of giving first aid and I plan to sign up for it.

I choose to attend to the course due to the fact that first aid is greatly important to people. If a person gets injured but needs medical care before a doctor can found, every second counts in saving life, in that case the knowledge of first aid can help save lives. Beside, I plan to study medicine and devote my life to medical research. Hopeful, the course will help me to learn about what to deal with medical emergencies.

 

【解析】 本文为记叙文。作者学校将开始冬令营。有各种课程,如烹饪,游泳和急救。作者对急救很感兴趣,因为急救知识可以帮助挽救生命,所以打算报名参加急救课程。 1.考查时态。句意:我很高兴我们学校将开始冬令营活动。本文叙述的是现在的事情,文章的时态主要是一般现在时,可知,本句要用一般现在时,和主语一致,故把delighted改为delights。 2.考查名词复数。句意:我很高兴我们学校将开始冬令营,包括各种各样的课程。course前有a variety of修饰,以及空后such as cooking, swimming, and giving first aid.可知,有许多课程,要用复数,故把course改为courses 3.考查固定用法。句意:说实话,我对急救课程很感兴趣,我打算报名参加。to be honest为固定用法,意为“说实话”,故把honesty改为honest。 4.考查语境。句意:我选择这门课程是因为急救对人们非常重要。attend to为固定用法,意为“照顾,照料”。attend意为“参加,上(课)”,本处是指上课,故删除attend后的to。 5.考查语境。句意:如果一个人受伤了,而且在找到医生之前需要医疗护理,每一秒都是挽救生命的关键。分析上下两句可知,二者是并列递进关系而非转折关系,故把but改为and。 6.考查以动词的被动语态。句意:如果一个人受伤了,在找到医生之前需要医疗护理,那么每一秒都会影响生命。从句的主语a doctor与动词find二者是被动关系,医生是被找到,故要用情态动词的被动语态即can be found,故在can后添加be。 7.考查定语从句。句意:在这种情况下,急救知识可以帮助挽救生命。分析句子可知,本句是定语从句,定语从句中in which case为固定用法,意为“在那种情形下”,不能用that,故把that改为which。 8.考查词义辨析。句意:除此之外,我还打算学习医学。根据前后的语境可知,beside为介词,意为“在……旁边”;besides意为“此外,除此之外”。根据语境可知,此处是递进关系的“此外”。故把beside改为besides。 9.考查副词辨析。句意:希望这门课程能帮助我了解如何处理医疗紧急情况。分析句子结构可知,本句在句中作状语修饰整个句子,此时要用副词修饰,故把Hopeful改为Hopefully。 10.考查固定用法。句意:希望这门课程能帮助我了解如何处理医疗紧急情况。do with和deal with均意为“处理”。但do with中的do是及物动词,“如何处置某物”是what to do with。而deal with中的deal是不及物动词,“如何处置”时,要用how to deal with。故此处可把what改为how或deal改为do。  
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