Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Longjing tea, it has topped the list of the ten most famous teas in China with its color, taste and shape, is named after its production region—Longjing Village of West Lake.

Thanks for Emperor Qianlong of the Qing Dynasty, the tea has earned a high reputation. The story went that Emperor Qianlong was visited the mountain during his Hangzhou travels, and he saw some ladies picking the tea at the foot of the mountain. He was very interested in their movements that he decided to have a go himself. While picked the tea, he received the news of his mother’s illness, so he carelessly puts the leaves in his sleeve and left Hangzhou for Beijing. He visited his mother immediately upon his arrival in Beijing. His mother smelt the fragrance of the tea leaves from his sleeves and wanted to have taste. After drinking cup of tea, she found herself completely refreshing, and she even praised it as cure for all illnesses. From now on, the tea was listed as the tribute tea (贡茶).

Answer

1. it→which

2. for→to

3. 去掉was

4. very→so

5. picked→picking

6. puts→put

7. sleeves→sleeve

8. refreshing→refreshed

9. cure前加a

10. now→then

【解析】

本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述了龙井茶的发展历史。

第一处： 考查定语从句。此处应为which引导的非定语从句，来修饰Longjing tea，从句中作主语，指物，故将it改为which。

第二处： 考查固定短语。此处意为“多亏了”，用thanks to，故将for改成to。

第三处： 考查动词语态。谓语动词visit与主语Emperor Qianlong是主动关系，故用主动语态， 故去掉was。

第四处： 考查固定句型。so...that...是固定句型，表示“如此……以至于……”，故将very改为so。

第五处： 考查非谓语动词。go+doing sth.是固定短语，表示“去做某事”，接现在分词作宾语，故将picked改为picking。

第六处： 考查动词时态。根据其后的and left可知此处需用一般过去时，故将puts改为put。

第七处： 考查名词的单复数。根据上文，可知当年乾隆只是把少量茶叶放在一只袖子里，用单数，故将sleeves改为sleeve。

第八处： 考查非谓语动词。根据语意，此处是用来形容herself，表示人的感受，用ed形式形容词，故refreshing改成refreshed。

第九处： 考查冠词。根据语意，此处意为“一种治疗办法”，表示泛指，故cure前加a。

第十处：考查固定搭配。句意：从那时起，这种茶被列为贡茶。根据语意，此处意为“自那以后”，故将now改成then。