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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently, the number of foreign visitors to China have been on the increase. During their stay, they all show a strongly interest in our traditional culture. So, to better promote our culture, I had some ideas. As we all know, English is playing more and more important role in promoting cultural exchanges. So they must learn to speak fluent English. We should also enrich our knowledge of traditional culture. Besides, English channels should be opened, from that foreign visitors can get more informations about our culture. On conclusion, the promotion of our culture need combined efforts. Only in this way can foreign visitors to have a better understanding of our country.

 

1. have→has 2. strongly→ strong 3. had→ have 4. more前面加上a 5. they→ we 6. from that→ from which 7. informations→ information 8. On→ In 9. need→ needs 10.去掉visitors后面的to 【解析】 这是一篇议论文。文章作者针对“如何更好地推广我们的文化”这一问题,提出了一些想法。 第一处:考查主谓一致。句意:最近,来中国的外国游客的数量一直在增加。the number of“……的数量”,作主语,谓语动词用单数,故have改成has。 第二处:考查形容词。句意:在他们逗留期间,他们都对我们的传统文化表现出浓厚的兴趣。修饰名词interest,用形容词,故strongly改成strong。 第三处:考查时态。句意:所以,为了更好地推广我们的文化,我有一些想法。描述主语现在的状态,用一般现在时,故had改成have。 第四处:考查冠词。句意:众所周知,英语在促进文化交流方面发挥着越来越重要的作用。play an important role in“在……中起着重要作用”,more的首字母发音是辅音音素,故more前面加上a。 第五处:考查代词。句意:所以,我们必须学会说流利的英语。文中表示“我们”,故they改成we。 第六处:考查定语从句。句意:此外,应该开通英语频道,外国游客可以从中获得更多关于我们文化的信息。这里含有一个介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词English channels。介词+关系代词引导的定语从句,指人,只能用whom;指物,只能用which,故from that改成from which。 第七处:考查不可数名词。句意:此外,应该开通英语频道,外国游客可以从中获得更多关于我们文化的信息。information是不可数名词,故informations改成information。 第八处:考查固定短语。句意:总之,我们的文化推广需要共同努力。in conclusion“总之”是固定短语,故On改成In。 第九处:考查主谓一致。promotion表示“推广”,是不可数名词,且在一般现在时中,故need改成needs。 第十处:考查部分倒装。句意:只有这样,外国游客才能更好地了解我们的国家。这个句子使用了部分倒装,把情态动词can提到了主语的前面,情态动词后,用动词原形,应该说can have a better understanding of,故去掉visitors后面的to。  
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