Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As the coming of skiing competition in our school , we decided to practice skiing. Last Sunday, my classmates and I got together at the school gate. In the early morning, leading by Ms Li, we went there by bus. On the bus we sang some popular songs and play some games as well. Then we told some instructions on how to ski safe. It took us half a hour to arrive. On changing our clothes, we couldn’t wait it to ski on the snow. We were black and blue because of many fall. The sun set after we knew it. Although we were tired and hungry, we were exciting.

Answer

1.As→With

2.leading→led

3.play→played

4.we后添加were

5.safe→safely

6.a→an

7.去掉it

8.fall→falls

9.after→before

10.exciting→excited

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。主要记叙了作者和同学上周日一起去练习滑雪的事情。

1.考查介词。句意：随着学校里滑雪比赛的到来，我们决定练习滑雪。结合句意表示“随着……的到来”短语为with the coming of sth.，应用介词with。故As改为With。

2.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知lead在句中作非谓语动词，与逻辑主语we构成被动关系，故应用过去分词led。故leading改为led。

3.考查动词时态。此处为and连接的并列谓语，根据上文we sang some popular songs and，可知应用一般过去时。故play改为played。

4.考查动词语态。此处we与谓语动词构成被动关系，表示“被告知”，且事情发生在过去应用一般过去时，主语为we，谓语动词应用were。故we后添加were。

5.考查副词。修饰动词ski应用副词safely，表示“安全地”。故safe改为safely。

6.考查冠词。hour为元音音素开头的单词，应用不定冠词an。故a改为an。

7.考查固定短语。句意：一换好衣服，我们就迫不及待地想在雪地上滑雪。表示“迫不及待做某事”短语为can’t wait to do sth.，故去掉it。

8.考查名词的数。fall为可数名词“摔跤”，此处由many修饰应用复数形式。故fall改为falls。

9.考查连接词。句意：太阳在我们知道之前就落山了。表示“在……之前”应用before。故after改为before。

10.考查形容词。此处修饰人应用-ed结尾形容词excited，表示“激动的”。故exciting改为excited。