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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

To offer a chance for our students to keep in touch with society, last Saturday our class was organized some meaningful social practice activities. We were divided into second groups. One group went to the crossings near our school, intending to helping the traffic policemen. The another group went to collect rubbishes in Hongxing Park. Meanwhile, we introduced some simply ways of environmental protection and remind people not to destroy the beauty of nature. It was the memorable day because our behavior received praise the public and we benefited a lot from these activities.

 

第一处: our→us 第二处: 去掉was 第三处: second→two 第四处: helping→help 第五处: another→other 第六处: rubbishes→rubbish 第七处: simply→simple 第八处: remind→reminded 第九处: the→a 第十处: praise后面加from 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲了为了给学生提供一个与社会保持联系的机会,上周六作者班组织了一些有意义的社会实践活动。作者从活动中受益良多。 第一处:考查代词宾格。句意:为了给我们学生提供一个与社会保持联系的机会,上周六我们班组织了一些有意义的社会实践活动。作介词之后的宾语,用宾格us,且作ourselves的同位语。所以our改成us。 第二处:考查语态。句意:为了给我们学生提供一个与社会保持联系的机会,上周六我们班组织了一些有意义的社会实践活动。“我们班”和“组织”之间是主动关系,用主动语态,所以去掉was。 第三处:考查基数词。句意:我们被分成两组。“两组”应该用基数词,所以second改成two。 第四处:考查固定用法。句意:有一组来到我们学校附近的十字路口,打算帮助交警。intend to do想要做某事,该用法是固定用法,所以helping改成help。 第五处:考查固定用法。句意:另一组去红星公园收垃圾。one…the other一个……另一个,该用法是固定用法,所以another改成other。 第六处:考查名词。句意:另一组去红星公园收垃圾。rubbish是不可数名词, 所以rubbishes改成rubbish。 第七处:考查形容词。句意:同时,我们介绍了一些简单的环保方法,提醒人们不要破坏自然之美。修饰名词ways,用形容词,所以simply改成simple。 第八处:考查时态。句意:同时,我们介绍了一些简单的环保方法,提醒人们不要破坏自然之美。描述发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时,所以remind改成reminded。 第九处:考查冠词。句意:这是一个值得纪念的日子,因为我们的行为得到了公众的赞扬,我们从这些活动中受益良多。day 为可数名词,本句泛指“一个值得纪念的日子”,memorable的首字母发音是辅音,用不定冠词a,所以the改成a。 第十处:考查固定用法。句意:这是一个值得纪念的日子,因为我们的行为得到了公众的赞扬,我们从这些活动中受益良多。receive …from从…… 中收到,该用法是固定用法,所以praise后面加from。  
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