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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

The other day, I was as usually walking Toby when suddenly the dog ran up to the little boy. It kept jump up, trying to get a bite of the hamburger the boy holding. It happens so fast that all I could do was shout, “Stop, Toby!” But it was too later, Toby had taken a bite from the boy’s hamburger. I felt very guilty. It was my fault which Toby wasn’t under control. So I apologized sincerely to the frightening boy and his angry mother. Through this incident I realized that I had to train his dog to behave in itself.

 

1.usually→usual 2.the→a 3.jump→jumping 4.holding前加was 5.happens→happened 6.later→late 7.which→that 8.frightening→frightened 9.his→my 10.去掉in 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者遛狗时发生意外事件,狗失去控制咬了一个男孩手里的汉堡导致男孩受惊害怕,从而使作者意识到应该训练自己的狗懂规矩。 第一处:考查固定结构。句意:前几天,我像往常一样陪托比散步,突然那只狗向一个小男孩跑了过去。as usual,固定结构,意为“像往常一样”。故将usually改为usual。 第二处:考查冠词。句意:前几天,我像往常一样陪托比散步,突然那只狗向一个小男孩跑了过去。结合句意和语境可知,句中第一次提及该男孩,应用不定冠词作限定词。故将the改为a。 第三处:考查动名词。句意:它不停地跳起来,想咬一口那个男孩拿着的汉堡包。keep doing,固定结构,意为“一直做某事”。故将jump改为jumping。 第四处:考查句子成分。句意:它不停地跳起来,想咬一口那个男孩拿着的汉堡包。分析可知,“the boy holding”应是之前名词the hamburger的定语从句,从句使用过去进行时表状态,但从句中谓语结构不完整,缺少助动词was。故在holding前加was。 第五处:考查时态。句意:事情发生得太快了,我所能做的就是大叫:“停下,托比!”分析可知,文章时态应是一般过去时。故将happens改为happened。 第六处:考查形容词。句意:但为时已晚,托比已经咬了男孩的汉堡一口。结合句意可知,这里表示“太晚了(too late)”,later作为形容词时意为“后来的;晚期的”,不符合句意。故将later改为late。 第七处:考查强调句式。句意:托比失控是我的错。分析可知,此句应是强调句结构:it is/was +强调部分+that+其他内容。故将which改为that。 第八处:考查形容词。句意:所以我真诚地向那个受惊的男孩和他生气的妈妈道歉。分析可知,修饰人应用-ed形式结尾的形容词。故将frightening改为frightened。 第九处:考查物主代词。句意:通过这件事,我意识到我必须训练我的狗举止规矩。结合句意和语境可知,这里应是“我的狗(my dog)”。故将his改为my。 第十处:考查介词和固定结构。句意:通过这件事,我意识到我必须训练我的狗举止规矩。behave oneself,固定结构,意为“使举止规矩”。故将in去掉。
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C.To introduce a designer who turns cow manure into clothing.

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