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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently I found a donation box in my neighborhood. People come to them when they have old clothes, bags, newspapers and books donate. This box, I think, was of great significance. My mother buys me a lot of clothes, and I grow so fast. Much clothes don’t fit for me any longer. I’ve got no ideas about how to deal with the clothes which are real new and still in good condition. However, with this donation box, I can help those people in need. In a word, I do think it is a good idea what lights up our life and makes the world the better place to live in.

 

them→it donate前面加上to was→is and→but Much→Many 去掉fit后的for ideas→idea real→really what→that/which the→a 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,作者介绍了家附近的一个捐赠箱以及作者对它的看法。 第一处:考查代词。句意:当人们有旧衣服、旧袋子、旧报纸和旧书籍要捐赠时,他们就会来它这里。此处指代前面提到的“a donation box”,故them改为it。 第二处:考查不定式。句意同上。have sth to do表示“有某事/物要做”,此处需要用不定式作后置定语,故donate前面加上to。 第三处:考查时态。句意:我认为这个捐赠箱有很大的意义。陈述的是客观事实,用一般现在时,故was改为is。 第四处:考查连词。句意:我妈妈给我买了很多衣服,但我长得太快了。根据句意可知,“妈妈给我买了很多衣服”和“我长得快”之间是转折而非并列关系,故and改为but。 第五处:考查much与many的区别。句意:许多衣服我穿着不合身了。much修饰不可数名词,many修饰可数名词复数,故Much改为Many。 第六处:考查fit的用法。句意同上,此处的fit为及物动词,表示“使……合身”,后面直接接宾语,for是多余的,故去掉for。 第七处:考查名词的数。句意:我不知道如何处理这些新衣服,它们仍然完好无损。此处的idea是不可数名词,have no idea表示“不知道、不清楚”,故ideas改为idea。 第八处:考查副词。句意同上,修饰形容词new用副词,故real改为really。 第九处:考查定语从句。句意:总之,我确实认为这是一个好主意,点亮我们的生活,使世界成为一个更适合居住的地方。此处为定语从句,关系词指代先行词idea并在从句中作主语,what改为that/which。 第十处:考查冠词。句意同上,根据句意可知此处泛指“一个更好的地方”,better的发音以辅音素开头,故the改为a。  
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16.A.do B.like C.have D.want

17.A.trembling B.keeping C.getting D.moving

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B.To lay foundation for the idea of plants’ family feelings.

C.To introduce the topic of how family matters to animals.

D.To explain why people usually give more jobs to their relatives.

2.Which of the following can best replace the underlined word “heretical” in paragraph 2?

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3.What may be the plants’ way of expressing their care for relatives?

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B.They spread their roots far so as to protect their peers.

C.They care for their injured peers by silently taking roots.

D.They move their leaves to share sunlight with their close peers.

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B.Corn planted with corn can produce more than that with rice.

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D.The closer rice is planted with their relatives the more they will produce.

 

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C.To make some comparisons. D.To introduce a new topic.

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D.The identity of Vancouver.

 

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