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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last year I happened to make some woolen blankets. While the frost hit, I handed it out to fellow homeless people. It was a brief experience and positive. Throughout the winter, I made about dozens people's mornings with a clean new blanket. Yesterday, around a year later, I saw a homeless person walked down the street aimless with one of those blankets. I'm sure I've ever seen him before so that blanket went on a journey and is still providing a comfort to someone else. Now I'm not homeless anymore and thinking of that really brighten my day. I just wish I have some more wool now.

 

1.While→When 2.it→them 3.and→but 4.dozens后添加of 5.walked→walking 6.aimless→aimlessly 7.ever→never 8.删除a 9.brighten→brightens 10.have→had 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。主要记叙了作者去年为无家可归的人分发自己制作的羊毛毯,昨天作者在此看见一个无家可归的人拿着一条自己制作的毯子走在街上,这让作者很开心。作者希望能有跟多的羊毛,这样作者就可以用它们制作出更多的羊毛毯,帮助更多的人了。 1.考查连词。句意:当霜冻来临时,我把它们分发给那些无家可归的人。此处为时间状语从句,且从句中hit为短暂性动作不能用while引导,应用when。故While改为When。 2.考查代词。此处指代上文some woolen blankets应用代词them。故it改为them。 3.考查连词。句意:这是一次短暂但积极的经历。结合上下文语境可知为转折关系,应用连词but。故and改为but。 4.考查介词。根据短语dozens of表示“几十,许多”。故dozens后添加of。 5.考查非谓语动词。根据短语see sb. doing sth.表示“看见某人做某事”, a homeless person 和walk down在逻辑上是主动关系。故walked改为walking。 6.考查副词。此处修饰动词walk应用副词aimlessly,表示“漫无目的地”。故aimless改为aimlessly。 7.考查副词。句意:我确信我以前从未见过他,所以那条毯子开始了一段旅程,仍然在给别人提供安慰。结合句意此处表示“从未见过”应用never。故ever改为never。 8.考查冠词。comfort为不可数名词,表示“安慰”,此处不与冠词搭配。故删除a。 9.考查主谓一致。本句主语为thinking of that,时态为一般现在时,故谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。故brighten改为brightens。 10.考查虚拟语气。此处为wish后接宾语从句的虚拟语气,wish 后接宾语从句时,从句谓语通常要用虚拟语气,根据后文now可知表示与现在事实相反的愿望,从句谓语用一般过去时。故have改为had。  
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Where 2.(do) the country's secret lie? Some say it's school lunches 3.matter a lot. According to a UNICEF report, Japan tops the charts for childhood health indicators. with low rates of infant(婴儿) deaths and few underweight children. It also has the 4.(low) rate of childhood obesity among the 36 member countries of the Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development. Certainly, there are various factors at work, including a health-conscious society and 5.(regular) scheduled health check-ups.

6., a nationwide school lunch program actually plays a key role. In schools, the lunches are compulsory, which means that no packed lunches 7.(allow). While they are not free for most, they are financially sponsored, making them affordable 8.students.

Each meal is designed to have around 600 - 700 calories, 9.(balance) between carbohydrates(碳水化合物), proteins and vegetables. A typical meal is rice with grilled fish and a leafy vegetable, 10.is served with soup with pork, alongside milk and dried fruit.

 

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The husband began_______and started stuttering(口吃). It was _______that he had a speech disorder. I could tell the wife had told her husband very ________ what she wanted as a way for him to practice speaking. It took some time for him to order and ________ she was sitting there and she looked so ________ despite her husband's frequent stuttering.

The whole thing brought me to tears, making me realize that a huge part of  ________is acceptance, tolerance and support. She________have made the order and made things much easier for her husband and avoid the________from other tables, but she didn't.________she supported him and was ________to see him complete the order. I ________these wealthy people had everything going well for them. But it just ________me that all of us have our problems. I ________ took their gesture of wanting to order as bad manners, but they did it because he really wanted to get the order right. What a true love!

1.A.confident B.wealthy C.ordinary D.energetic

2.A.hugged B.supported C.seated D.waved

3.A.tables B.cleaning C.favor D.dishes

4.A.sent B.let C.carried D.helped

5.A.signaled B.whistled C.explained D.applied

6.A.risky B.absurd C.rude D.difficult

7.A.delivered B.glanced C.changed D.took

8.A.exercising B.ordering C.acting D.drilling

9.A.important B.well-known C.unlikely D.evident

10.A.particularly B.frankly C.casually D.regularly

11.A.at times B.of course C.by accident D.in the meantime

12.A.content B.nervous C.aggressive D.awkward

13.A.sacrifice B.love C.dignity D.sympathy

14.A.must B.needn't C.could D.should

15.A.diners B.stares C.noise D.laughter

16.A.Rather B.Otherwise C.Instead D.Therefore

17.A.determined B.bound C.proud D.encouraged

18.A.knew B.assumed C.concluded D.remembered

19.A.warned B.hurt C.inspired D.reminded

20.A.initially B.secretly C.naturally D.generally

 

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◆Clarify your expectations from the beginning. Do you know in advance that the alarm clock bothers you every morning? 1.Let your roommate know about your habits and preferences. Communicating what you need is one of the best ways to remove problems before they become problems.

◆Address problems when they' re little. 2. Are your clothes being borrowed faster than you can wash them? Addressing things that disturb you while they' re still little can help your roommate realize something is wrong. And it is much easier than addressing them after they've become big.

3. This may seem simple, but it’s probably one of the biggest reasons why roommates experience conflict. Don't you think he'll mind if you borrow his sneakers for a game? Don't borrow, use or take anything without getting permission first.

◆Be open to new things. Your roommate may be from someplace you've never heard of. They may have a religion or lifestyle that is completely different from your own. Be open to new ideas and experiences, especially as it relates to what your roommate brings into your life. 4.

◆Stay open to change. You should expect to learn and grow and change during your time at school. And the same should happen to your roommate.5. Be comfortable addressing things that unexpectedly come up, setting new rules and being flexible to your changing environment.

A.Respect your roommate's stuff.

B.Find a solution that works for both of you.

C.That's why you went to school in the first place, right?

D.You may love having your study group into your room.

E.As the semester progresses, realize things will change for both of you.

F.Is your roommate always forgetting her stuff for the shower. and taking yours?

G.That you need ten minutes to yourself before talking to anyone after you wake up?

 

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The researchers noted significant changes in misophonia sufferers’ brain activity when they heard a “trig- ger sound.” Turns out those with misophonia have a developmental difference in their brains frontal lobe(额叶) that causes their brains to react harshly to those triggers. It also causes them to sweat and their heart rates to increase.

“For many people with misophonia, this will come as welcome news as for the first time we have shown a difference in brain structure and function in sufferers.” said Dr Sukhbinder Kumar. “This study shows the critical brain changes as further evidence to convince a skeptical medical community that this is a real disorder.”

1.What is the best title for the text?

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C.Can we make use of these sounds D.Never be afraid of such noise again

2.What can be inferred from the second paragraph?

A.Misophonia can be a sign of intelligence.

B.Misophonia is actually a physical disability.

C.The term misophonia has been widely accepted.

D.Noise pollution has ruined many lives until now.

3.What does Kumar think of the research?

A.Cold. B.Favorable.

C.Doubtful. D.Neutral.

4.Where is the text most probably taken from?

A.A guidebook. B.A review.

C.A magazine. D.An interview.

 

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The most basic effect occurs in the area associated with language reception. Processing written material - from the letters to the words to the sentences to the stories themselves - takes your attention to interpret the information. Typically, when you read, you have more time to think, judge and even criticize. And the very nature of such an ordinary activity encourages the brain to work harder and better, deepening your understanding of your course and your future career.

And the benefits of reading continue long after you've put down that great book. It is clarified that some of those benefits last for five days. We call that a shadow activity, almost like a muscle memory - that means, even if you are a retired sportsman now, some skills can still be stored in your memory. That means the language part of the brain would get a workout from reading.

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1.The text is mainly written to

A.show the power of knowledge B.persuade people to read regularly

C.clarify the benefits of good books D.introduce how to improve memory

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A.Judging. B.Thinking. C.Learning. D.Reading.

3.What does the third paragraph suggest?

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C.The retired sportsmen have good memories. D.Reading a lot is beneficial to one' s muscles.

4.For whom is the text mainly intended?

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