Question

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

While waiting to pick up a friend at the airport in Portland, I had one of life-changing experiences. It happened only two feet away from me.

In order to find my friend among the passengers, I noticed a man walking toward me carrying two light bags. He stopped right next to me to greet his family.

First he smiled to his younger son, about six years old, as he laid down his bags. They gave each other a long hug（拥抱）. I heard the father say, "It's so good to see you. I missed you so much! " His son smiled shyly and replied happily, "Me, too, Dad! ”

Then the man stood up, cupping （捧着） his son's face in his hands and said, "You are already quite a young man. I love you very much, Zach! "Then the father gave son a warm hug.

At the same baby girl was squirming（来回扭动） excitedly in her mother' s arms The man said, "Hi baby girl! "as he gently took the baby from her mother. He kissed her face. The little girl felt satisfied in her father's arm.

After that. he handed the baby to his son and gave his wife the longest and warmest hug He gently said, "I love you so much! " They looked at each others eyes with big smiles on their faces.

At that moment, they reminded me of newly -married couples, though it couldn't be possible by the age of their son. Full of admiration, I asked, "Wow! How long have you two been married?" "Almost 10 years in total. " the father replied.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1：

When asked how long he had been away from his family, he said it was only two days.

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Paragraph 2：

“I hope my marriage is similar to your!" I talked to him.

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Answer

Paragraph 1：

When asked how long he had been away from his family, he said it was only two days. I was surprised to know he had been away for only two days. I had thought he'd been away for at least several weeks-if not months. I asked the man how I could have a happy family and a good relationship with my friends. The man answered, "It's love, understanding and responsibility. You can be the owner of yourself. "

Paragraph 2

"I hope my marriage is similar to yours!" I talked to him. The man smiled and looked at me straight in the eye. "Don't hope, friend…decide!" Then he showed his wonderful smile again and said, "God bless!" I was watching the family walk out of sight when my friend came to me and asked. "What are you looking at?" Without a second thought. I replied, "My future!"

【解析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。要求根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者在波特兰机场等朋友的时候，有了一次改变人生的经历。在作者两英尺远的地方，一个男子迎接他的家人。当见到面时，这名男子和儿子、女儿和妻子互相拥抱并说“我爱你”，一片融洽，这令作者非常羡慕，不由得询问他结婚多久了。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当被问及他离开家人有多久时。他说只有两天。所以应该写作者知道只有两天时的惊讶，以及追问他关于怎样才能有一个幸福的家庭，和朋友们保持良好的关系。第二段开头是：“我希望我的婚姻和你的相似！”我对他说。本段应该写男子鼓励作者要坚定信心也这样做。接到朋友后，作者还陷入深思。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。