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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿)),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

At lunch in the first day of my high school, I saw a girl sit alone. I decided to sit with her and we had pleasant chat. Late, we became close friends in the following three years. One day, he shared something touching with me. "Do you remember the day when you come over and sat next to me, wearing a big smile?" she asked me. "I wanted you to know how much special you were. I was disappointing at that time, but your smile made my day," she added.

I can't help smile each time I think of the scene, that shows me that a simple act of kindness can change lives greatly.

 

【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者高中时,看见一女孩独自坐着,带着微笑去交流后,他们成为朋友,之后回忆此事,得出一个道理:一个简单的善举可以极大地改变生活。 1.考查介词。in + 不具体时间,on +具体时间,分析句子可知,“高中第一天”是具体的时间,应用on。故将in改为on。 2.考查现在分词。分析语境可知,作者看见一女孩正独自坐着,用see sb. doing sth(看见某人正在干某事),所以用现在分词表正在进行。故将sit改为sitting。 3.考查冠词。分析语境可知,chat在此处表示“闲谈、闲聊”,是可数名词,前面用不定冠词a修饰,表泛指。故在had和pleasant之间加a。 4.考查副词。分析句子可知,此句是用副词作状语,应用Later。故将Late改为Later。 5.考查代词。分析语境可知,全文讲的是作者和女孩的故事,此处人称指代不一致,应用she。故将he改为she。 6.考查时态。分析句子可知,the day后面跟了一个定语从句,由语境可知,他们认识的那天已经发生,所以定语从句谓语动词应用一般过去时。故将come改为came。 7.考查句型。how + 形容词+主语+谓语,是一个感叹句,意为“…多么…啊”,much多余。故去掉much。 8.考查形容词。关于感情类的动词,人做主语用-ed,物做主语-ing;分析句子可知,I是主语,指人,应用-ed形式。故将disappointing改为disappointed。 9.考查固定搭配。can’t helping doing是固定搭配,意为“忍不住做……”,此空用doing形式。故将smile改为smiling。 10.考查定语从句关系代词。分析句子可知,此句此一个非限制性定语从句,先行词是the scene,指物,在从句中作主语,非限制性定语从句中不能用that,应用which。故将that改为which。  
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