Question

近年来大城市交通拥堵严重，影响了人们的生活和经济发展，对此人们经常抱怨。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点用英语给报社写封信。

(1)交通现状及影响； (2)提出改进建议(修路架桥；限制私家车通行；完善公交体系)； (3)希望建议被采纳。

注意:

(1)词数 100 左右； (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Editor,

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays, people in many big cities are always stuck in traffic jams and complaining about the tough situation. It has seriously influenced people's daily life and economic development.

To solve the problem, I'd like to put forward some pieces of advice. First of all, more streets and roads should be built so we can speed up the flow of buses and cars in this way. Besides, the number of private cars should be put under control, which can undoubtedly smooth the traffic flow. Meanwhile, buses should run on their own special routes which are not supposed to be used by other vehicles. Last but not least, it is necessary to develop the underground quickly.

I do hope my suggestions will be helpful and be well taken.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，近年来大城市交通拥堵严重，影响了人们的生活和经济发展，对此人们经常抱怨。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点用英语给报社写封信。

(1)交通现状及影响； (2)提出改进建议(修路架桥；限制私家车通行；完善公交体系)； (3)希望建议被采纳。

第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，交通现状及影响。第二段，提出改进建议(修路架桥；限制私家车通行；完善公交体系)第三段，希望建议被采纳。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: be always stuck in，solve the problem，put forward

speed up ，under control，be supposed to do sth.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句 Besides, the number of private cars should be put under control, which can undoubtedly smooth the traffic flow. 省略that的宾语从句I do hope my suggestions will be helpful and be well taken.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: First of all，Besides,Last but not least.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。