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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

We all expect such a picture. On the warm and pleasant weekend, we drive to the countryside for a picnic. After lunch, sit under a tall and straight pine tree, we drink tea and chat each other. Our parents recalled old family stories and share with us their youthful experience. Of course, they also praise us for our progress. The happy hours that we are together will help develop an increasing close relationship and deepen the love we have for each other. When we get old many years late, we will find that these fond memories we create together with our parents will bring you a lot of joy and comfort. After all, love and memories that are ever-lasting.

 

1. the→a; 2. sit→ sitting; 3.chat后加with; 4. recalled→recall; 5. experience →experiences; 6. that→when; 7. increasing→increasingly; 8. late→later; 9. you→us; 10. 去掉that; 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。作者主要告诉我们要多与父母在一起,留下美好回忆。 1.考查冠词。句意:在一个温暖愉快的周末,我们开车去乡下野餐。此处这个周末是第一次提到,要用不定冠词,翻译为“一个温暖愉快的周末”,warm是以辅音音素开头的词,应使用不定冠词a。故将the改为a。 2.考查现在分词。此处要用现在分词sitting作状语,与主语we是主动关系。故将sit改为sitting。 3.考查介词。动词chat是不及物动词,后边要接宾语需要加上介词with,意思是“与彼此交谈”。故在chat后加with。 4.考查动词时态。根据上文的描述说的都是现在的事情,所以此处“我们的父母回忆起旧的家庭故事,”也应该用一般现在时态。故将recalled改为recall。 5.考查名词复数。句意:我们的父母回忆起旧的家庭故事,并与我们分享他们的年轻经历。名词experience“经历”是可数名词,此处所说的“父母们的经历”肯定不止一次,所以要用复数形式。故将experience改为experiences。 6.考查定语从句。这是一个定语从句,先行词hours是指时间,从句中不缺少主语或宾语,所以要用关系副词when引导该定语从句,在从句中作状语;而that在定语从句要作主语或宾语。故将that改为when。 7.考查副词。此处develop an increasingly close relationship意思是“发展日益密切的关系”,副词increasingly(日益地)作状语,修饰形容词close。故将increasing改为increasingly。 8.考查副词。句意:当很多年后我们变老了的时候,我们会发现我们和父母一起创造的这些美好的回忆会给我们带来很多快乐和安慰。固定用法:当表示“……时间以后”时,我们通常使用later。故将late改为later。 9.考查代词。句意:当很多年后我们变老了的时候,我们会发现我们和父母一起创造的这些美好的回忆会给我们带来很多快乐和安慰。根据句意可知,应该是“这些美好的回忆会给我们带来很多快乐和安慰”而不是给“你们”,故将you改为us。 10.考查简单句型。句意:毕竟,爱与记忆是永久的。本句只是一个简单句,that无论是作代词,还是连接词,在此处都多余了。故将that去掉。  
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