Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仪涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号Ʌ ), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下画-横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限-词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Nancy, aged 65, is one of my special friend. 1 like chatting with her but she enjoys my company. We talk about everything and kept no secrets from each other. It's nice of her to give me so many wise advice, from that 1 have benefited a lot. Last Saturday I visited her as usually. When I knocked at the door, there was no answer. Looked through the window, I was shocked to see her lying on floor. Immediately, I called 120. Minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took her to the hospital. She thanked to me for having saved her life. I was happy to have done that.

Answer

1. friend → friends

2. but → and

3. kept → keep

4. many → much

5. that → which

6. usually → usual

7. Looked → Looking

8.在on和floor之间加the

9. late → later

10.去掉thanked和me之间的to

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了，作者和南希好朋友，有一次作者去南希家拜访，作者发现南希晕倒了，立刻叫救护车，救了南希的命。

1.考查名词的数。one of +可数名词复数，意为“……中之一”，所以应用名词的复数形式。故将friend改为friends。

2.考查连词。分析句子可知，前句“我喜欢和她聊天”和后句“她喜欢我的陪伴”，是并列关系，应用and。故将but改为and。

3.考查时态。分析句子可知，前句谓语动词talk用的是一般现在时，前后两句是并列句，时态保持一致，所以后句谓语动词也应用一般现在时。故将kept改为keep。

4.考查much的用法。分析句子可知，wise advice 是不可数名词短语，much修饰不可数名词，many修饰可数名词复数。故将many改为much。

5.考查非限制性定语从句关系代词。分析句子可知，wise advice后面接了一个非限制性定语从句，wise advice是先行词，指物，在从句中做from的宾语，应用关系代词which，非限制性定语从句中关系词不能用that。故将that改为which。

6.考查固定搭配。as usual是固定搭配，意为“通常”。故将usually改为usual。

7.考查现在分词。分析句子可知，此句无连词且已有谓语动词was，所以look要用非谓语形式做状语，look和主语I之间是逻辑上的主动关系，所以用现在分词（doing）表主动。故将Looked改为Looking。

8. 考查固定搭配。on the floor是固定搭配，意为“在地上”。故在on和floor之间加the。

9.考查副词。分析句子可知，“30分钟之后”在句子中做状语，副词做状语，应用副词later。故将late改为later。

10. 考查固定搭配。thank sb. for doing sth.是固定搭配，意为“因做某事感谢某人”，应去掉to。故去掉thanked和me之间的to。