Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改 10 处, 多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

I wanted to give my mother something specially as a birthday gift. At a shop, I saw a beautiful pearl necklace (项链) which would have been ideal, and it was too expensive. My shoulder dropped and I left the shop, disappointing. The next day, I was walking along the beach near my home when I notice a beautiful shell. I thought that I should make a necklace use seashells, so I collected some. I started to make it when I got home, hoping they would be as beautiful as the pearl one what I had seen at the shop. I gave my mother the necklace on her birthday, and she was delighted to receive such beautiful gift and praised me to being creative.

Answer

1.specially→special

2.and→but

3.shoulder→shoulders

4.disappointing→disappointed

5.notice→noticed

6.use→using

7.they→it

8.what→that/which或去掉 what

9.such后加 a

10.to→for

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。记叙了作者一次用贝壳给妈妈做了一件特别的生日礼物的事情。

1.考查形容词。修饰不定代词something，应用形容词special，something special表示“特别的东西”。故specially改为special。

2.考查连词。句意：在一家商店里，我看到一条很漂亮的珍珠项链，这条项链本来是最理想的，但它太贵了。结合句意可知上下文为转折关系，应用连词but。故and改为but。

3.考查名词的数。shoulder为可数名词，数量大于一应用复数形式。故shoulder改为shoulders。

4.考查形容词。修饰人的感情，应用-ed结尾形容词。故disappointing改为disappointed。

5.考查动词时态。综合全文可知，时态均为一般过去时，此处也应用一般过去时。故notice改为noticed。

6.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，use在句中作非谓语动词，与逻辑主语I构成主动关系，应用现在分词。故use改为using。

7.考查代词。根据后文be as beautiful as the pearl one可知，物品数量只有一个，应用it指代。故they改为it。

8.考查定语从句。此处为限定性定语从句，修饰先行词one，且先行词在从句中做宾语，指物，应用关系代词that或which，或做宾语时，可以省略关系词。故what改为that/which或去掉what。

9.考查冠词。such是形容词，用来修饰名词，gift为可数名词，此处表示泛指，应用不定冠词，且beautiful为辅音音素开头的单词。构成 “such+ a(n)+形容词+名词”结构。故such 后加a。

10.考查介词。根据短语praise sb. for sth.表示“为某事表扬某人”。故to改为for。