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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作 文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的 噌加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划-横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’ve always been fond in collecting stamps since I was a child. As far as I'm concerned, collecting stamps is a meaningful hobby, help me to learn a lot of. Besides, dealing with my collection of stamps not only gives me great satisfactions but also helps relax yourself under the great pressure of studies. What's more, I even earned money by selling stamps and my collection will be more valuable as time goes by. Therefore, my parents are strongly against it. They consider it waste of money and they also think that sorting out my stamps may take up too much of my time, that should be spent on my studies. What can I talk them into supporting my hobby?

 

1. in → of 2. help → helping 3. 去掉of 4. satisfactions → satisfaction 5. yourself → myself 6. earned → earn 7. Therefore → However 8. waste前加a 9. that → which 10. What → How 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,作者介绍了自己的爱好——集邮。 第一处:考查固定短语。句意:我从小就喜欢集邮。be fond of表示“喜欢”,故in改为of。 第二处:考查非谓语动词。句意:就我而言,集邮是一种有意义的爱好,能帮助我学到很多东西。分析句子结构可知此处使用非谓语动词,collecting stamps与help之间是逻辑上的主谓关系,表示主动,用现在分词作状语,故help改为helping。 第三处:考查a lot of与a lot的区别。句意同上,a lot of重在表示物品的数量,常修饰名词,a lot则重在表示程度,常修饰动词,此处的of是多余的,故去掉of。 第四处:考查名词的数。句意:此外,处理我收集的邮票(做好我的集邮工作)不仅给我很大的满足,也帮助我在巨大的学习压力下放松自己。此处的satisfaction表示抽象意义,为不可数名词,没有复数形式,故satisfactions改为satisfaction。 第五处:查代词。句意同上,根据“me”可知此处表示“我自己”而不是“你自己”,故yourself改为myself。 第六处:考查时态。句意:更重要的是,我甚至通过卖邮票赚钱,我的收藏会随着时间的推移变得更有价值。文章的基础时态为一般现在时,此处也应该用一般现在时,主语是I,谓语动词用复数,故earned改为earn。 第七处:考查副词。句意:然而,我父母极力反对我集邮。“我喜欢集邮”与“父母反对我集邮”之间是转折而非因果关系,故Therefore改为However。 第八处:考查固定短语。句意:他们认为这是浪费钱,他们还认为整理邮票可能会占用我太多的时间,而我应该把这些时间花在学习上。a waste of表示“浪费……”,故waste前加a。 第九处:考查非限定性定语从句。句意同上,此处为非限定性定语从句,关系词指代先行词time并在从句中作主语,而that不能引导非限定性定语从句,故that改为which。 第十处:考查疑问词。句意:我怎样才能说服他们支持我的爱好呢?根据句意可知此处表示“如何”而不是“什么”,故What改为How。  
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