Question

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tom 来信询问有关传染性肺炎（infectious pneumonia）的情况。请你给Tom 回信，内容包括：

1. 肺炎简况；

2. 应对措施；

3. 有信心战胜疫情。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Tom,

I am very glad to receive your letter inquiring about infectious pneumonia. I am writing to tell you about this.

Since the outbreak of an infectious disease in Wuhan in December 2019, the Chinese government has decisively closed down the city to prevent the spread of the disease. In the meanwhile, although cases have been found throughout the country, we Chinese people bravely face it. People all over the country work together to fight against the epidemic.

At this particular time , we should go out as little as possible. If going out, we must wear protective masks to prevent ourselves from getting infected. In addition, we should keep good healthy habits, such as washing our hands more, circulating the air and so on.

As many Chinese say, “Come on, Wuhan”, we believe we can certainly overcome the

epidemic!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信，告知对方中国传染性肺炎的情况。

第一步：

审题：信件——有关传染性肺炎的情况的回信

人称：第一、三人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分。第一部分告知收到来信，第二部分说明传染性肺炎在中国爆发的情况以及采取的应对措施；第三部分表示人们有信心战胜疫情。

要点：

1. 告知收到来信

2. 说明传染性肺炎在中国爆发的情况

①传染性肺炎在武汉爆发后，中国政府决定封城，以免疾病扩散

②人们勇敢面对，齐心协力与疫情作斗争

③采取的应对措施：尽量少出门、外出戴口罩、保持良好的健康习惯

3. 表示人们有信心战胜疫情

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

receive one’s letter；inquire about；the outbreak of；close down；the spread of the disease；throughout the country；face；fight the epidemic；as little as possible；wear protective masks；prevent sb. from；get infected；keep good healthy habits；overcome the epidemic

第三步：连词成句

(1)I am very glad to receive your letter inquiring about infectious pneumonia.

(3) Since the outbreak of an infectious disease in Wuhan in December 2019, the Chinese government has decisively closed down the city to prevent the spread of the disease.

(4) Although cases have been found throughout the country, the Chinese people bravely face it.

(5) People throughout the country work together to fight against the epidemic.

(6) We should go out as little as possible.

(7) We must wear protective masks to prevent ourselves from getting infected.

(8) We should keep good healthy habits.

(10) We believe we can certainly overcome the epidemic!

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序：first of all; to begin/start with; in the beginning; firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或补充关系：what is more; besides; moreover; apart from; in addition; as well as; not only…but(also); meanwhile; in the meantime; some…others

表示转折对比关系：but; however; although; though; yet; while; on one hand…on the other hand ...

表示因果关系：because; as; therefore; as a result; as a consequence; consequently; thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。