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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(一);并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A big poster in our school reminded us of that the annual Earth Day was around the corner.It called upon us to join in the actions.

Our class comes up with the idea to make the most of using materials.After class,we settled down to our work as it had planned.We brought to our classrooms worn-out clothes,piece of cardboard,and empty bottles,and turned them into dolls,handbags and small vases.That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to people here.All were extreme happy with those gifts,especially the little kids and elderly people.And we were invited to a meeting,that we shared our experience with all the students of our school.

We are very proud of us and believe we can do more for the better world.

 

1. 去掉of 2.comes→ came 3.using →used 4.planned 前面加 been 5.piece→pieces 6.here → there 7.extreme→ extremely 8.that → where 9.us→ ourselves 10.the better world → a better world 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述作者班级为迎接即将到来的地球日所采取的行动。 1.考查固定搭配。句意:我们学校的一张大海报提醒我们一年一度的地球日就要到了。固定搭配:remind sb. of sth.“提醒某人某事”。此处the annual Earth Day was around the corner.是一个完整的句子,所以remind后面是宾语从句。故去掉of。 2.考查时态。句意:我们班想出了充分利用使用过的材料的主意。结合句意可知此处用一般过去时态,故把comes改成 came。 3.考查过去分词。句意:我们班想出了充分利用使用过的材料的主意。此处use和materials之间是被动关系,是过去分词作前置定语,故把using 改成used。 4.考查时态语态。句意:下课后,我们按原计划静下心来工作。此处it指work,和plan之间是被动关系,所以句子用过去完成时态的被动语态。故在planned 前面加 been。 5.考查名词复数。句意:我们把破旧的衣服、几片纸板和空瓶子带到教室里,把它们做成玩偶、手袋和小花瓶。结合句意piece应该用名词复数形式,且piece为可数名词。故把piece改成pieces。 6.考查here和there的用法。句意:那个周末,我们去了附近的一个社区,把它们送给那里的人。此处指“附近社区的人”,所以应该是“那里”。故把here 改成 there。 7.考查副词。句意:所有人都对这些礼物非常满意,尤其是小孩子和老人。此处happy是形容词,由副词修饰,故把extreme改成 extremely。 8.考查定语从句。句意:我们被邀请参加一个会议,在那里我们与我们学校的所有学生分享我们的经验。此处meeting是先行词,在后面的定语从句中作地点状语,所以用关系副词。故把that 改成 where。 9.考查反身代词。句意:我们为自己感到骄傲,相信我们可以为一个更好的世界做更多的事情。根据句意,此处指为“我们自己”,所以句子用反身代词,故把us改成 ourselves。 10.考查不定冠词。句意:我们为自己感到骄傲,相信我们可以为一个更好的世界做更多的事情。此处指为“一个更好的世界”。better首字母的发音为辅音音素,故把the better world 改成 a better world。  
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D.The difficulty of Cantlon's work.

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A.By using a larger variety of subjects.

B.By employing a wider range of math skills.

C.By raising the difficulty of the math tasks.

D.By expanding the number of the children.

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