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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Our over-use of electricity is a big problem. It contributed to global warmingwhat is something that we really should be worried about. It is harming our environment and we need to do what we can stop it. Not only that, but as if we continue to use a same large amount of energy we will soon run out of it. How would we survive in a world with electricityI think we should start preparing for it now. Cut back on our use of electricity would save energy resources effective so that they could last for longer. I know for sure that I can cut down our use in electricity. And if everyone do his or her best, we can make a big difference.

 

第一处: contributed→ contributes 第二处: what→ which 第三处: can后加to 第四处: 去掉as 第五处: a→ the 第六处: with→ without 第七处: Cut→ Cutting 第八处: effective→ effectively 第九处: our→ my 第十处: do→ does 【解析】 本文是一篇说明文。主要讲述过度用电导致全球变暖,危害环境,作者从自身做起,提倡减少用电,节约能源。 第一处:考查时态。句意:它导致了全球变暖,这是我们真正应该担心的事情。文章是在描述客观事实,并且整段都用的一般现在时,主语为it。故将contributed改为contributes。 第二处:考查非限制性定语从句。句意:同上。分析句子可知,what is something that we really should be worried about.为非限制性定语从句,关系代词指代的是前面的句子,应用which,故将what改为which。 第三处:考查不定式。句意:它正在危害我们的环境,我们需要尽我们所能来阻止它。分析句子可知,这里stop it作目的状语,应用不定式形式,本句can后面省略了谓语动词do而完整的句型应该是we need to do what we can do to stop it,故将can后加to。 第四处:考查从属连词。句意:如果我们继续使用同样大量的能源,我们很快就会用完它。分析句子可知这里是条件状语从句,as if 是引导方式状语从句,故去掉as。 第五处:考查冠词。句意:我们如何在没有电的世界里生存? 本句中的world是指独一无二的世界,应用定冠词the修饰,故将a改为the。 第六处:考查介词。句意:同上。根据上下文语境可知应该是在没有电的世界里如何生存,故将with改为without。 第七处:考查动名词。句意:减少用电可以有效地节约能源,使其使用时间更长。分析句子可知,句子的主语不能用动词原形cut,应该用动名词形式,故将cut改为cutting。 第八处:考查副词。句意:同上。分析句子可知,句中的effective是修饰动词would save的,应用副词形式,故将effective改为effectively。 第九处:考查代词。句意:我确信我能减少用电。分析句子可知,本句中的主语是I,所以后面的物主代词应该为my,保持代词指代一致,故将our改为my。 第十处:考查时态。句意:如果每个人都尽了自己最大的努力,我们就会产生很大的影响。分析句子可知,if从句中的主语是everyone,时态为一般现在时,谓语动词应用第三人称单数,故将do改为does。  
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The total number of cases in Italy, the European country hardest1.hit by the virus in Europe, rose to 10,149 from a previous 9, 172,2.increase of 10.7, according to the Civil Protection Agency on Tuesday.

Italy will expand the lockdown of the Lombardy region to the3.entirelycountry, Prime Minister Giuseppe Conte said Monday as Italy’s case count surged,4.makeit the country with the most COVID-19 cases outside of China.

People throughout the country of 60 million should not travel other than for work or emergencies. Conte said. He added that all public gatherings5.banand sporting events suspended. The decision was made6.protectthe most vulnerable people in the country, he said,7.the measures will take effect Tuesday

“The right decision today is to stay at home.” Conte said. “Our future and the future of Italy is in our hands. These hands have to be more responsible today8.ever before.”

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At the same time, the traffic had stopped. I looked over and______a group of 12 people, out of their cars, standing in a circle about 15 feet away from a young man, who was______still on the pavement. I asked them what had happened. They said the kind young man had got out of his car to cross the road and______when a car drove along the inside lane(车道), very fast, to get around the______traffic. Unfortunately, the man was______by it. Many people said he was______; several had checked. But a feeling inside me said, “Can they be certain he is dead

He was badly injured, but I checked again and again, and felt a very______heart beat. I______pushed his head upwards. He then coughed, and started taking rapid, shallow breaths. By then, the ambulances had______. When they______, I left the scene and walked back to my car.

Due to the excellent doctors and______of nurses, the young man did______. He was released from the hospital after many months and his______was covered by all the news stations. I smiled to myself and felt very______to be at the right place at the right time, knowing a young man had his whole life in front of me.

1.A.exploded B.crashed C.sped D.disappeared

2.A.escaped B.lost C.returned D.failed

3.A.rich B.sick C.injured D.single

4.A.circle B.way C.area D.car

5.A.check B.report C.explore D.tell

6.A.Surprisingly B.Obviously C.Fortunately D.Honestly

7.A.met B.chose C.led D.saw

8.A.sitting B.lying C.standing D.holding

9.A.greet B.help C.serve D.look

10.A.light B.local C.oncoming D.heavy

11.A.stopped B.attacked C.hit D.pushed

12.A.dead B.abnormal C.ill D.painful

13.A.steady B.weak C.rapid D.wild

14.A.quickly B.patiently C.hopefully D.cautiously

15.A.arrived B.stayed C.followed D.waited

16.A.got across B.faded away C.took over D.gave away

17.A.praise B.care C.trust D.encouragement

18.A.grow B.remember C.survive D.change

19.A.kindness B.politeness C.calmness D.friendliness

20.A.confident B.comfortable C.different D.happy

 

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How to get by in a foreign country

Not knowing the local language is no reason not to travel. Here are some tips to get by from someone who does it all the time. Download a language translation app. Thanks to new inventions, traveling in foreign countries has become much easier.

1. . Find an app that works for you. It best to find one that specializes in the language you need to translate especially if the language uses a character set you're not familiar with, or is one you have difficulty pronouncing.

2. Body language is an easy way to communicate with locals. Gestures are almost all globally understood. 3.. In many countries, for example, nodding means “no”, and shaking your head means “yes”. So, a quick web search for the country you're visiting and “gestures” or “body language” will turn up anything you need to be aware of before you go. Hire a local tour guide 4. You can always search the web for local tour guides before you go, or find a guide through your hotel or a travel agent(旅行社) .

Learn a few keywords

Try learning basic words and phrases like “hello”, “thank you” and “I'm sorry” .

5.

A.Don't speak to strangers

B.There are exceptions, however

C.Speak with your hands and head

D.A guide can always help you with locals

E.Many foreign language apps translate words on the spot

F.It is a form of respect and will go along way to bring you closer to locals

G.Always try searching the internet when you meet some communication problems

 

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    When you buy fresh-cut flowers, do you think about where they came fromYou might think they were grown somewhere nearby. The reality, though, is that the cut flower trade is increasingly International. Today, thanks to airplanes and high-tech cooling systems, even the most delicate flower be exported and sold thousands of kilometers away from where it was grown.

The Netherlands handles about 60 percent of the world’s cut flowers. And its auction houses(拍卖行)are very large---Aalsmeer, near Amsterdam, is auction house in the sense that Tokyo is a city, or Everest a mountain. About 120 soccer fields would fill its main building. Nineteen million flowers are sold here on an average day.

The Netherlands is also a world leader in developing new flower varieties. Dutch companies and the government invest a great amount of money in flower research. Their scientists look for ways to lengthen a flower’s vase life, to strengthen flowers to prevent them from being damaged while traveling, and also to strengthen the natural fragrance of the flowers.

There are also many other places with a better climate for growing flowers, and the climate of Ecuador is almost perfect. With predictable rainy periods and 12 hours of sunlight each day, Ecuador’s roses are famous for their large heads and long, straight stems(茎). Every year, Ecuador sells about 500 million flowers to the U.S. alone. The industry has brought employment opportunities and a stronger economy to the country. “My family has TV now. There are radios.” says Yolanda Quishpe, 20, who picked roses for four years.

To others, the increasingly international nature of the flower trade is very bad news. In recent years local growers in the U.S. faced huge competition from international flower companies, and many lost their businesses. Lina Hale, an independent rose grower said her father had predicted the situation in the 1980s. “I see a train coming down the track,” he warned her, “and it’s coming straight towards us.”

1.What do we know about Aalsmeer?

A.It’s very large.

B.It’s as big as Tokyo.

C.19 million flowers are grown there.

D.60% of the Netherland’s flowers are sold there.

2.What is one aspect of the Netherlands’ flower research?

A.How to increase flower production.

B.How to avoid climate’s effect on flowers.

C.How to speed up the process of flowering.

D.How to keep flowers fresh during transportation.

3.What does the author want to show through Yolanda Quishpe’s words?

A.Flowers from Ecuador are beautiful.

B.Ecuador could grow even more flowers.

C.The flower trade in Ecuador benefits the local.

D.Rose-picking is a very popular job in Ecuador.

4.What Lina Hale’s father said suggested that ______.

A.he was excited to see the train

B.he knew his business would be affected

C.he was sure customers wouldn’t want

D.he thought trains were a new way to deliver flowers

 

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    Social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter have changed the way that people interact and connect on a daily basis. They are changing the face of relationships of every kind. One of the major concerns that have caught the attention of many, is the influence that social media may be having on social anxiety disorders.

If removed from their phone for a few hours or a few days, the average person would likely feel anxious about not being “connected”. Most people have probably experienced an occasion in which they posted a creative photo, and waited to see “how many” or “retweets” they received. If this number is lower than expected, the(自我)ego is going to take a hit. There is also constant checking of the number of “followers” and “friends” that you have, and these numbers can have a direct influence on feelings of acceptance and popularity.

Anxiety can arise from feeling at a loss when faced with too much going on at one time Multitasking can very quickly lead to increased levels of anxiety. Most people can likely relate to feeling the constant need to check their phone while driving, during meals or at work. This desire is actually leading to increased levels of anxiety. The choice to be constantly connected leads to the feeling of having to always make yourself available.

Social anxiety is much different from the anxiety one feels from being offline. It’s a more serious type of anxiety resulting from the fear of being judged by others while in a social interaction. Cases can range from mild--- and are often the cause of a lot of drinking with others to severe, in which case a person may avoid parties and get-togethers altogether.

The degree to which social media and technology are changing our lives and introducing new forms of anxiety is anything but deniable(可否认的). The real question is to what extent are they introducing new disorders or increasing existing ones like social anxiety. It’s certainly a topic worth studying more to determine who is being helped, who is being harmed and how social anxiety can be dealt with.

1.What is the major focus of the text

A.Human desire for social interaction.

B.The influence of social media on anxiety.

C.Anxiety resulting from interpersonal relationships.

D.The popularity of social media in people’s daily life.

2.How does the author explain social anxiety in Paragraph 2?

A.By giving examples. B.By offering statistics.

C.By providing processes. D.By making comparisons.

3.According to the author, which of the following can lead to increased levels of anxiety?

A.Not being available for get-togethers. B.Chatting on the phone with a friend.

C.Using the phone while driving. D.Eating meals alone.

4.What does the underlined word “they” in the last paragraph refer to?

A.Life changes. B.Anxiety degrees.

C.New forms of anxiety. D.Social media and technology.

 

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