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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下面一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。.

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。.

“Who would like this $20 bill!?" a well-known speaker asked, held up a $20 bill. Hand started going up. He said, "I am going to give them to one of you and first, let me do this." He left it on the ground and deliberate stepped on it with his shoe again and again. He picked it up, now covering with dirt. Still the hands were up in air. Because it did not decrease in value and was still worth of $20.

Many times in your lives, dropped and thrown into the dirt by the decisions you make and the circumstances and the difficulties that comes your way, you may feel as though you are worthless. But you are still priceless to your family members, that love you and depend on you.

 

1. held→ holding;2.Hand→Hands;3.them→it/this;4. deliberate→ deliberately; 5.and→but;6.在in和air之间加the;7.covering→covered;8.把worth后面的of去掉;9.comes→come;10.that→who 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述的是一位著名演讲者用一张20美元纸币做的实验。他把纸币扔在地上,弄脏,人们仍然想要,因为纸币的价值没变。文章告诉我们“在你的生活中,有很多次,你所做的决定、所处的环境和遇到的困难把你抛入尘土,你可能会觉得自己毫无价值。但是对你的家人来说,你仍然是无价的,他们爱你,依赖你。” 1.考查现在分词作伴随状语。句意:“谁想要这20美元纸币?”一位著名的演讲者举起一张20美元纸币问道。此处句子主语speaker和hold之间是主动关系,是现在分词作伴随状语,故把held改成holding。 2.考查名词复数。句意:开始有人举手。因为举手的人不止一个,所以用名词复数,故把Hand改成Hands。 3.考查代词。句意:我将把它给你们中的一个,但首先,让我这样做。因为a $20 bill是单数形式,用it或this指代,故把them改成it/this。 4.考查并列连词。句意:我将把它给你们中的一个,但首先,让我这样做。句中前后是一种转折关系,故把and改成but。 5.考查副词。句意:他把它放在地上,故意用鞋一遍又一遍地踩它。此处stepped是动词,由副词修饰,故把deliberate改成deliberately。 6.考查过去分词。句意:他把它捡了起来,现在上面沾满了泥土。固定词组:be covered with“”被…覆盖”。此处是过去分词做状语,故把covering改成covered。 7.考查冠词。句意:仍然有很多手举在空中。固定词组:in the air“在空中”。故在in和air之间加the。 8.考查固定用法。句意:因为它没有贬值,并且仍然值20美元。固定用法:be worth+金钱“值…...”。故把worth后面的of去掉。 9.考查主谓一致。句意:在你的生活中,有很多次,你所做的决定、所处的环境和遇到的困难把你抛入尘土,你可能会觉得自己毫无价值。此处difficulties是先行词,是复数形式,在后面的定语从句中作主语,从句的谓语动词用复数形式,故把comes改成come。 10.考查定语从句。句意:但是对你的家人来说,你仍然是无价的,他们爱你,依赖你。此处members是先行词,指人,在后面的定语从句中作主语,且that不能引导非限制性定语从句,故把that改成who。  
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17.A.Additionally B.Luckily C.Actually D.Obviously

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B.abandon young birds for lack of food

C.be unable to find places for nesting

D.be in danger of starvation

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C.Search for. D.Wait for.

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C.There is almost little migration of birds in winter.

D.Birds' migration is affected by various aspects.

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B.Who instructed ancient people to create them.

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D.What kind of clothes ancient people preferred to wear.

2.What do most historians think of Ancient China?

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D.It built a good relationship with the rest of the world.

3.What can we infer about the clay sculptures in Ancient China before 220BC?

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D.They looked similar to the Greek ones.

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B.Westerners Found in Ancient China

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