Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

We all agree that we should recycle less — at home, in the office or when out and about. But for material to be actually recycled, they first need to find their way to the right waste stream so that they can be then collected and taken to the right place for recycling. This is what the process of sorting allows us to do it.

For effective recycling we need effectively sorting — and this needs to happen first, in our own home and second, in dedicated sorting plants to that waste collected from our doorstep and collecting points is taken. When you put a plastic bottle in the right recycling bag and bin, you are helped sort recyclable waste so that the right material can be fed into the right recycling process. Unless sorting does not happen, a lot of recyclable materials can end up in landfills or be burned, with valuable resources lose from our economy. Sorting at home is first step towards recycling.

Answer

1. less → more

2. material → materials

3. 去掉it

4. effectively → effective

5. that → which

6. and → or

7. helped → helping

8. Unless → If

9. lose → lost

10.在first前面加the

【解析】

这是一篇说明文。文章讲述了，为了实现有效的回收利用，我们需要进行有效的分类，在家里分类是走向回收的第一步。

1. 考查语境理解。由语境可知，此处指“我们都同意我们应该回收更多”，所以应用more。故将less改为more。

2. 考查名词复数。由语境可知，此处指“许多材料”，material可数名词，应用名词的复数形式。故将material改为materials。

3. 考查表语从句。is后面是一个表语从句，引导词what在从句中做do的宾语，因此去掉it。故去掉it。

4. 考查副词。动名词sorting需要形容词来修饰，所以用形容词effective。故将effectively改为effective。

5. 考查定语从句。此句是定语从句，dedicated sorting plants是先行词，指物，分析句子可知，是waste collected from our doorstep and collecting points is taken to dedicated sorting plants，所以用“介词+ which（物）”，即to which。故将that改为which。

6. 考查连词。由语境可知，此处指“或者”，应用并列连词or。故将and改为or。

7. 考查现在分词。由语境可知，此处指“正在帮忙”，现在进行时（am/is/are doing），应用现在分词（doing）。故将helped改为helping。

8. 考查条件状语从句。由语境可知，此处指“如果”，应用从属连词If。故将Unless改为If。

9. 考查过去分词。此处是“with +名词+非谓语形式”结构，名词短语valuable resources和动词lose是逻辑上的被动关系，应用过去分词表被动。故将lose改为lost。

10. 考查冠词。由语境可知，此处指“第一步”，应用“the +序数词”（第……）。故在first前面加the。