Question

假定你是李华，在新冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间，你的英国笔友 Jason 对你一直很关心。现在请你给他写封邮件，内容包括:

1.对Jason 表示感谢；

2.疫情中身边的感动；

3.疫情带给你的思考。

注意:

1.词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，

参考词汇:新冠状病毒肺炎 novel coronavirus

Dear Jason,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Jason,

Thank you for your concern, which was a great comfort to me in the difficult time.

The outbreak of the novel coronavirus pneumonia saw more of people’s hope and love than fear. Our teachers challenged themselves by supplying us with timely online lessons prepared with devotion. Many social workers worked day and night without going home, putting the people before their own families.

We are very close to beating the virus and now back to school, but we should never forget the price we have paid. We are supposed to live in harmony with nature and care more about public health crisis.

Thanks again for being there for me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信。感谢英国笔友（pen friend）Jason在新冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间对自己的关心，同时谈论疫情中自己身边的感动及带给个人的思考。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：文章主要谈论疫情期间发生在身边的感动，所以时态用一般过去时。

结构：总分法。先总说感谢英国笔友（pen friend）Jason在新冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间对自己的关心，之后分说疫情期间发生在自己身边的感动，最后谈论本次疫情带给自己的思考。

第二步：列提纲（可能用到的词汇和短语）

thanks for, be great comfort to sb. , outbreak, break out, heart-warming, supply sb. with sth., provide sb. with sth., online courses, prepare for, work day and night to protect the public, take effective measures, prevent the spread of the infection, make sacrifice for, be supposed to do, in harmony with, take care of, pay attention to

第三步：连词成句

1. It was a great comfort to me in the difficult time.

2. The outbreak of the novel coronavirus pneumonia saw more of people’s hope and love than fear.

3. Many social workers worked day and night without going home.

4. We are supposed to live in harmony with nature and care more about public health crisis.

5. Thanks again for being there for me.

第四步：连句成篇（润色）

用非限制性定语从句表达：

Thank you for your concern, which was a great comfort to me in the difficult time.

用过去分词做后置定语：

Our teachers challenged themselves by supplying us with timely online lessons prepared with devotion.

用现在分词作状语：

Many social workers worked day and night without going home, putting the people before their own families.