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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Peter,

I'm sorry to learn that you are addicted to social media so that my normal life is out of balance. Here is several suggestions for you to give it up.

Firstly, instead surfing the Internet, try turn off your phone once in a while. Secondly, it is a good idea to develop a new hobby, such as hiking, that is related to the nature and can help you a lot. Finally, you can go to visit your friends or staying with your family to communicate with them face to face rather than online. The world is such wonderful; better not be trapping in an unreal world.

Hope the advices will be of help to you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

1. my → your 2. is → are 3.在instead后面加of 4. turn → turning 5. that → which 6.去掉nature前面的the 7. staying → stay 8. such → so 9. trapping → trapped 10. advices → advice/suggestions 【解析】 这是一篇应用文。文章讲述了,作者得知Peter沉迷于社交媒体,写信给予Peter不要沉迷网络的几条建议。 1. 考查代词。本文是作者写信给Peter,Peter在文中用第二人称指代,此处指“Peter的正常生活失去平衡了”,应用形容词性物主代词your指代。故将my改为your。 2. 考查主谓一致。Here is several suggestions for you to give it up是一个倒装句,主语是several suggestions(复数),谓语动词应用复数形式are。故将is改为are。 3. 考查固定搭配。instead of (n./doing/pron.)是固定搭配,意为“代替”。故在instead后面加of。 4. 考查动名词。此处指“尝试偶尔关掉手机”,try doing sth.意为“尝试着做某事”,应用动名词(doing)形式。故将turn改为turning。 5. 考查定语从句关系词。先行词a new hobby后接一个非限制性定语从句,指物,在从句中作主语,应用关系代词which。故将that改为which。 6. 考查名词。nature一词作“自然界、自然、大自然”讲时,是个抽象名词,抽象名词表达的概念是看不见摸不着的,连一个的概念都没有,与独一无二无关,不加任何冠词。故去掉nature前面的the。 7. 考查动词。or并列连词,前后语法结构一致,or前的go to visit your friends是动词原形短语,or后也用动词原形。故将staying改为stay。 8. 考查副词。此处指“很精彩”,应用副词so修饰形容词wonderful。故将such改为so。 9. 考查过去分词。此处指“最好不要被困在虚幻的世界里”,是被动语态(be done),应用过去分词。故将trapping改为trapped。 10. 考查名词。此处指“意见”(复数),advice是不可数名词,不加s,suggestion是可数名词,可加s,应用advice或suggestions。故将advices改为advice/suggestions。  
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