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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅沙及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个澜字符号(^),并在下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Editor,

Having learned from the newspaper that you will hold the annually summer camp in our city, I can't wait to apply to join in one of your activity.

On the activities you've provided, the one about nursing appeal to me most. I have always dreamed of becoming nurse since my childhood. To begin with, I hope to gain a few more knowledge of nursing so that it can help me major in nursing when I attended college. Besides, learning more about nursing can help me take good care of my parents, which have been devoted to care for me as I grow up.

I would appreciate it if you accept my application. Looking forward to hearing it from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

1. annually→ annual 2. activity→ activities 3. On→ Of或Among 4. appeal→ appeals 5. becoming后面加a 6. few→ little 7. attended→ attend 8. which→ who 9. care→ caring 10. it去掉 【解析】 本文是应用文。李华给编辑写信,申请参加夏令营中的护理活动,并说明了原因。 1.考查形容词。此处指每年的夏令营,修饰名词summer camp用形容词,故annually改为 annual。 2.考查名词复数。此处是one of句型,后面的名词用复数。故activity改为 activities。 3.考查介词。句意:在你们提供的活动中,关于护理的活动最吸引我。指“在活动中”介词用Of或Among,故On改为 Of或Among。 4.考查主谓一致。此处表示事实,与上下文时态一致用现在时。主语是the one表单数意义,谓语动词也要用单数。故appeal改为 appeals。 5.考查冠词。句中nurse是可数名词,开头是辅音因素,此处指成为一名护士,故becoming后面加a。 6.考查副词。此处指我希望获得更多的护理知识,a few 修饰可数名词,knowledge 是不可数名词要用a little 修饰。故few改为 little。 7.考查动词时态。此处指当我上大学时,动作还没有发生不用过去时。此处用一般现在时在从句中表将来,故attended改为 attend。 8.考查定语从句。根据句意和标点可知句中包含非限制性定语从句,先行词是my parents指人,which不能指人,应该用who。故which改为 who。 9.考查非谓语动词。be devoted to中的to是介词,后加动词-ing形式,故care改为caring。 10.考查动词。表示“收到某人的来信”是hear from sb.此处的it是多余的,故it去掉。
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