Question

假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Jeff 发来邮件，说他想在暑期来中国旅行，体验中国文化和饮食， 请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括：

1. 推荐旅游城市；

2. 推荐原因；

3. 祝他旅途愉快。

注意：1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

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Answer

Dear Jeff,

Knowing you are planning to travel to China during the summer vacation, I’m writing to recommend Chengdu, the capital of Sichuan Province to you.

Located in the southwest of China, Chengdu is so beautiful that it attracts millions of tourists all year round. Du Fu Thatched Cottage, one of the most famous tourist attractions in Chengdu, is well worth seeing. You can learn something about the well-known Chinese poet Du Fu and appreciate the park built in traditional Chinese style. Besides, you can taste local hot pot there, which is famous worldwide.

I wish you a pleasant journey.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给计划来中国游玩的美国笔友Jeff写封邮件，为他推荐旅游城市和原因。

第一步：审题。

体裁：邮件应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。

要点：1 推荐旅游城市

2 推荐该城市的原因

3 表达祝福

结构布局：

第一段， 知道Jeff计划来中国旅游体验中国文化和饮食，向他推荐旅游城市：广州

第二段，详细介绍推荐该城市的原因：

1 能体现广州岭南传统文化的景点之一：南海神庙

2 广州素有食在广州的美称：点心是它美食的代表之一

第三段，希望对Jeff有所帮助，并且祝福旅途愉快。

第二步：列重点词语，词组（注意好词的使用）

如：with the aim of ,Chinese cuisine, located at, stand for, abundant, traditional culture of Southern China, South China See Fane, tourist attractions, be shock at, traditional buildings of Southern China, marvel at, known as, representative等

第三步：连词成句（注意好句型的使用如主从复合句，非谓语动词，注意拼写和时态问题）

如：1 Hearing you are planning to have a trip to China with the aim of experiencing Chinese culture and Chinese cuisine during the summer vacation, I strongly recommend you Guangzhou, where I have lived since I was born.

第四步：连句成篇（注意衔接词的使用）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand…,some…while others… ；

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。

第五步：润色修改。