Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Wang Peng, a owner of a restaurant, felt frustrated when seeing his restaurant was empty. When his old customer didn’t come into his restaurant, he realized something terrible must happened. He found his old customer entered a new restaurant in where simple food was served. The owner of the restaurant, Yong Hui, promised that she would help customers lose weight and kept fit in two weeks. Wang Peng decided to do some researches, for he couldn't have Yong Hui get away with telling a lie. That he found at the library made him feel hopefully and he decided to win back his customers. One day Yong Hui came to his restaurant and talked about the idea to combine her menu in Wang Peng’s. Their business cooperation was so a success that before long they got married.

Answer

1.a→an
2.must后添加have
3.去掉in
4.kept→keep
5.researches→research
6.get→getting
7.That→What
8.hopefully→hopeful
9.in→with
10.so→such

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。主要记叙了餐厅老板王鹏发现，新餐厅老板雍慧承诺将帮助顾客减肥，并在两周内保持健康。王鹏决定做一些调查，因为他不能忍受雍慧撒谎而不受惩罚。有一天，雍慧来到他的餐馆，谈论把她的菜单和王鹏的结合起来的想法。他们的商业合作非常成功，不久他们就结婚了。

1.考查冠词。owner为可数名词，此处表示泛指应用不定冠词，且owner为元音音素开头的单词。故a改为an。

2.考查动词时态。句意：当他的老顾客没有来他的餐馆时，他意识到一定发生了可怕的事情。此处“可怕的事情”已经发生并对现在产生影响应用现在完成时，且must后跟动词原形。故must后添加have。

3.考查定语从句。此处为定语从句修饰先行词restaurant，且先行词在从句中做地点状语，故用关系副词where，前面不需要介词。故去掉in。

4.考查动词。根据上文help customers lose weight and可知此处help sb. do sth.，keep也应用动词原形。故kept改为keep。

5.考查名词。短语do some research表示“做研究”，research应用单数形式。故researches改为research。

6.考查非谓语动词。句意：王鹏决定做一些调查，因为他不能忍受雍慧撒谎而不受惩罚。根据短语could’t have sb. doing sth.表示“不能忍受某人做某事”。故get改为getting。

7.考查连接词。此处为主语从句，从句中缺少宾语，指代找到的动词应用what引导。句首字母要大写。故That改为What。

8.考查形容词。feel为系动词后跟形容词hopeful作表语。故hopefully改为hopeful。

9.考查介词。根据短语combine with表示“与……结合”。故in改为with。

10.考查形容词。修饰后文名词success应用such，so后接形容词。故so改为such。