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假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Susan看了你的微博后发来邮件,对你上周帮助一个迷路...

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Susan看了你的微博后发来邮件,对你上周帮助一个迷路的3岁小孩回家的事情很感兴趣。请你回复邮件,内容包括:

1.感谢关注;

2.助人经过;

3.你的感受。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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Dear Susan, Thanks for your attention! From your letter, I know that you are eager to get some details about my assistance. Here comes the story. Last week, I met a little boy on the street, who seemed helpless in the crowd. Then, I got closed to him and asked what had happened to him. He told me that he had got lost and couldn’t find his parents. Immediately, I took the poor boy to the police station and sought help from the policeman. There, I sat to accompany him, waiting for the police to bring some good news. Half an hour later, an anxious woman came in with a bag in her hand. While seeing the boy, the woman burst into tears, saying: “Thank Goodness! I finally find you and you are safe. ”Her boy pointed to me and said it was I who helped him when he did not know what to do on the street. After she calmed down, she turned around and expressed sincere gratitude to me and the police. “You are welcome”, I answered. Waving my hands to say goodbye, I left with relief. In this experience, I realize that helping others is really a kind of pleasure, which not only helps the one in need, but also enriches my own mind. Yours, LiHua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,询问你上周帮助一个迷路的3岁小孩回家的事情。 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文 时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。 结构:总分总法    总分总法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:1. 表达感谢:感谢他的关注 2. 具体内容 1)助人经过 2) 你的感受 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组) thanks for;eager to;get closed;get lost; seek help from;burst into tears;point to;calm down;with relief. 第三步:连词成句 1. Thanks for your attention! 2. From your letter, I know that you are eager to get some details about my assistance. 3. Here comes the story. 4. I met a little boy on the street, who seemed helpless in the crowd. 5. I got closed to him and asked what had happened to him. 6. He told me that he had got lost and couldn’t find his parents. 7. I took the poor boy to the police station and sought help from the policeman. 8. I sat to accompany him, waiting for the police to bring some good news. 9. Half an hour later, an anxious woman came in with a bag in her hand. 10. While seeing the boy, the woman burst into tears, saying: “Thank Goodness! I finally find you and you are safe. ” 11. Her boy pointed to me and said it was I who helped him when he did not know what to do on the street. 12. After she calmed down, she turned around and expressed sincere gratitude to me and the police. 13. “You are welcome”, I answered. 14. Waving my hands to say goodbye, I left with relief. 15. In this experience, I realize that helping others is really a kind of pleasure, which not only helps the one in need, but also enriches my own mind. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 第五步:润色修改
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