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假定英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、 删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限1;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Stacy,

I happened to have read your advertisement and have decided to apply to the job. The following are my self introduction.

As a high school student, I had been learning English for many years. I have a good command of English. I am always willing to help other because of my warm-heartedness and outgoing personality. In the addition, I am in good condition by taking exercise every day. Therefore, I am firmly convinced what 1 am qualified for the job.

By acting as a translator for you, unpaying as it is, not only it enrich my life, but it will be of great benefit to me in the long run. I believe I can accumulate some value job experience.

I would appreciate it if you could take my applications into consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.

 

1. to→for 2. are→is 3. had→have 4. other→others 5. in the addition 的 the 去掉 6. what→that 7. unpaying→unpaid 8. not only 后面加 will 9. value→valuable 10. applications→application 【解析】 这是一篇应用文。文章作者看到广告后,写信想要申请这份工作。在信中,作者进行了自我介绍,并表达了渴望获得这份工作的心情。 第一处:考查固定短语。句意:我碰巧看到了你们的广告,已经决定申请这个工作。apply for申请,该短语是固定短语,所以to改成for。 第二处:考查主谓一致。句意:以下是我的自我介绍。在一般现在时中,主语The following是第三人称单数,谓语动词用单数,所以are改成is。 第三处:考查时态。句意:作为一名高中生,我已经学习英语很多年了。表示过去的动作或状态持续到现在并且已经完成或可能持续下去,用现在完成时,所以had改成have。 第四处:考查代词。句意:因为我的热情和外向的性格,我总是愿意帮助其他人。other另外一个;others其他人,文中表示“其他人”,所以other改成others。 第五处:考查固定短语。句意:此外,通过每天锻炼身体,我的身体状况良好。in addition此外,该短语是固定短语,所以in the addition 的 the 去掉。 第六处:考查宾语从句。句意:因此,我坚信我能胜任这份工作。这里含有一个宾语从句,引导词在从句中不作任何成分,也没有实际意义,用that引导该宾语从句,所以what改成that。 第七处:考查倒装句和过去分词。句意:作为你的翻译,虽然没有报酬,但它不仅会丰富我的生活,而且从长远来看,它将对我有很大的好处。as可引起让步状语从句,表示“虽然、尽管”,但要用部分倒装结构,构成:过去分词 + as + 主语 + 系动词,所以unpaying改成unpaid。 第八处:考查部分倒装。这里not only…but also连接两个并列句,根据but it will be of great benefit to me in the long run.可知表示将要发生的事情,用一般将来时。not only后面的句子要使用部分倒装,把情态动词will放在主语的前面,所以not only 后面加 will。 第九处:考查形容词。句意:我相信我能积累一些宝贵的工作经验。该空修饰名词job experience,用形容词,所以value改成valuable。 第十处:考查名词单复数。句意:如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。“我的申请”是单数意义,用名词单数,所以applications改成application。  
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