Question

假定你是李华，你校外教Mr.Brown邀请你周日上午去听关于英国文学的讲座，但你因故不能参加。请根据以下提示，写封邮件向Mr.Brown说明情况。

1.表示歉意；

2.说明理由；

3.表示遗憾；

4.希望得到讲座的有关资料。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr.Brown,

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Mr.Brown,

I'm so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on the British literature this Sunday morning,because an old classmate of mine will come to see me that day.We haven't seen each other for quite a long time and I have promised to meet him at the railway station,for he is not familiar with this city.

As you know,I'm deeply interested in the British literature,so it's really a pity to miss the lecture.But I wonder if I could borrow the record or have a copy of the courseware.It would mean so much to me to watch the record or PPT and learn what's covered in your lecture.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.表示歉意；2.说明理由；3.表示遗憾；4.希望得到讲座的有关资料。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，1.表示歉意；2.说明理由；第二段，3.表示遗憾；4.希望得到讲座的有关资料。第三段，表达希望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: be able to do , attend the lecture on the British literature this Sunday morning, promise to do sth ,be familiar with ,be interested in , miss the lecture, borrow the record, watch the record or PPT。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: that 引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句I'm so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on the British literature this Sunday morning, because an old classmate of mine will come to see me that day. as 引 导 的 非 限 制 性 定 语 从 句 As you know, I'm deeply interested in the British literature ,so it's really a pity to miss the lecture. if 引导的宾语从句But I wonder if I could borrow the record or have a copy of the courseware. what 引导的宾语从句It would mean so much to me to watch the record or PPT and learn what's covered in your lecture。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: But，so。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【亮点说明】

章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: that 引导的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句I'm so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on the British literature this Sunday morning, because an old classmate of mine will come to see me that day. as 引 导 的 非 限 制 性 定 语 从 句 As you know, I'm deeply interested in the British literature ,so it's really a pity to miss the lecture. if 引导的宾语从句But I wonder if I could borrow the record or have a copy of the courseware. what 引导的宾语从句It would mean so much to me to watch the record or PPT and learn what's covered in your lecture。

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。