Question

假定你是李华, 你的美国笔友Tom得知你校上月举办了首届校园科技节活动, 发邮件向你询问相关情况。请你回复邮件。内容包括：

1. 活动的目的；

2. 活动的形式, 如智能校园创客(maker)大赛, 科创成果展等；

3. 你的感受。

注意：1. 词数80左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数；

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

I am excited to tell you that the first Science and Technology Festival was held in our school last month,

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Answer

Dear Tom，

I am excited to tell you that the first Science and Technology Festival was held in our school last month，which aimed at enriching us students’ school life and promoting the students’ awareness of innovation.

There were a variety of activities in the festival，which included Makers on Campus，where participants could show their designs and products，and an exhibition of the students’ original inventions，designs and literary works.With the enthusiastic participation and support of all the students，the activity turned out a great success.I was astonished at the schoolmates’ creativity and teamwork spirits.

I do hope more activities will be held in my school to provide us with chances to practice our critical thinking and problemsolving abilities.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华, 你的美国笔友Tom得知你校上月举办了首届校园科技节活动, 发邮件向你询问相关情况。请你回复邮件。内容包括：

1. 活动的目的；

2. 活动的形式, 如智能校园创客(maker)大赛, 科创成果展等；

3. 你的感受。

第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态以一般过去时为主。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，活动的目的。第二段，活动的形式, 如智能校园创客(maker)大赛, 科创成果展等； 你的感受。第三段，表达期望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: enriching us students’ school life ，promoting the students’ awareness of innovation， a variety of ，turned out ，be astonished at ，teamwork spirits，provide sb. with sth.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子：which和where 引导的定语从句There were a variety of activities in the festival，which included Makers on Campus，where participants could show their designs and products，and an exhibition of the students’ original inventions，designs and literary works. 省略that的宾语从句I do hope more activities will be held in my school to provide us with chances to practice our critical thinking and problem solving abilities.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接：besides，moreover, finally。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。