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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

I, together with my parents and cousins, were planning to have a fantastic beach day. We’d been looking forward to the beach all week, so you can imagine how disappointing we were when Dad announced, “Today will be a inside day because of the bad weather.” To cheer us, Mom brought out our favorite snacks and all kinds of fruit that he had prepared for the outing. “Why not to arrange a fruit platter?” Mom suggested. We cut the fruit into different shape. Though we didn’t have a clear picture of how it would look like, we simple enjoyed ourselves. We made necessary adjustments, carefully adding or replaced each piece, and finally made it a piece of art.

 

第一句:were→was 第二句:disappointing→disappointed a→an 第三句:us后面加up he→she 第四句:去掉to 第五句:shape→shapes 第六句:how→what simple→simply 第七句:replaced→replacing 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。因为天气不好,作者一家计划好的海滩之行泡汤了。失望之时,妈妈提议一起用为海滩之行准备的水果来做个水果拼盘,最后他们玩的很开心。 第一处:考查主谓一致。句意:我,还有我的父母和堂兄弟姐妹,计划过一个美妙的海滩日。together with连接两个主语时,由前面的主语决定谓语动词的数,此句中谓语动词的单复数应由I决定,I 做主语谓语动词用单数,故将were改成was。 第二处:考查形容词。句意:我们整个星期都在期待着去海滩,所以你可以想象,当爸爸宣布“今天天气不好,不能外出”的时候,我们有多失望。disappointing意为“令人失望的”,一般修饰物;此处表示我们“感到失望的”应该用disappointed,故将disappointing改成disappointed。 第三处:考查冠词。句意:我们整个星期都在期待着去海滩,所以你可以想象,当爸爸宣布“今天天气不好,不能外出”的时候,我们有多失望。day为名词,此处泛指“呆在家里的一天”,要用不定冠词,但是day前面有inside修饰,inside为元音音素开头,前面应该用an而不是a。故将a改成an。 第四处:考查介词。句意:为了让我们高兴起来,妈妈拿出了她为这次外出准备的我们最爱吃的零食和各种水果。此处是固定短语cheer sb. up意为“使某人高兴起来”,故在us后加介词up。 第五处:考查人称代词。句意:为了让我们高兴起来,妈妈拿出了她为这次外出准备的我们最爱吃的零食和各种水果。这里的人称代词代指的是前文的mom,应该用she而不是he,故将he改成she。 第六处:考查固定句型。句意:“为什么不摆一个水果拼盘呢?”妈妈建议。why not 意思是“为什么不呢”一般用在疑问句中,表示提建议, why not后面要跟动词原型,所以这里的介词to是多余的,故将to去掉。 第七处:考查名词单复数。句意:我们把水果切成不同的形状。shape在此句中意为“形状”,是可数名词,根据different可知,这里表达的是“不同的形状”,shape要用其复数形式,故将shape改成shapes。 第八处:考查连词。句意:我们不清楚它会是什么样子,我们只是玩得很开心。分析可知,句子how it would look like为宾语从句,句中缺look like的宾语而不是状语,应该用what而不是how引导这个从句,故将how改成what。 第九处:考查副词。句意:我们不清楚它会是什么样子,我们只是玩得很开心。修饰动词enjoy应用副词,故将simple改成simply。 第十处:考查现在分词。句意:我们做了必要的调整,仔细地加上或换掉每块水果,最终使它成为一件艺术品。分析句子可知,replace在句中做状语为非谓语,与逻辑主语we之间是逻辑上的主谓关系,故要用其现在分词形式作状语,故将replaced改成replacing。
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