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Last weekend we went for camping in the mountains with our teacher，Anna. When we arrived， we made a camp fire first. Then，Anna taught us to catch fish so that they could have more food to eat that night. I liked the airs there because it was fresh and clean. Many stars were up highly in the sky and the moon looked bright . We all sat around the fire ， listening Anna's stories about her childhood. She was born into a poor family or she worked very hard to be successful. I was very touched that I couldn't sleep the whole night，thought about being a teacher in the future. When I get home，I said to my parents，“Everything was great about the camping. I want to be the teacher like Anna in the future. ”
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Believe it or not, have you ever noticed that you feel happier and more relaxed after you eat bread, pasta or fruit? Do you find that you are more energetic and awake after eating yogurt or beans? These things are not accidents. Food affect 1. we feel more than we think. Scientists researching 2. (it) effect on our moods are beginning to understand that we can influence our feelings with what we eat.
Although our moods relates 3. having various foods, it is not quite as simple as choosing the foods for the right occasions. If that 4. (be) the case, athletes would not eat a lot of carbohydrates before a race.
Another chemical 5. (connect) with our mood is caffeine, which 6. (find) in coffee, chocolate and many types of tea, is perhaps 7. worst thing you can have when you are feeling stressed.
Of course, 8. (enjoy) a nice meal with friends, whatever we eat, can also impact our spirits. Being with friends and family plays a big part in experiencing happiness.
Most 9. (important), though, remember the following old rule: try to eat different food, 10. not too much.
I spent last summer volunteering at a hospital. It was a gift to _______so many amazing people and I’d like to share one of these moments. One day, I was called to a room where a(n) _______woman was staying. Usually I helped with_______who were ready to leave. Instead, she _______to go to the gift shop. I got a _______, helped her into it, and headed down to the entrance.
When we got there, it wasn’t open yet. After a 30-minute _______, we entered the gift shop. As I pushed her around, I could see the _______ in her face as she looked at everything, happy to be out of her room. She _______some window decorations, and then saw chocolates.
She asked me to push her in that _______, and then I helped her__________all the different chocolate arrangements. __________ she decided on three different boxes.
She told me to write the numbers 1, 2, and 3 on the boxes. She __________that the nurses were taking such good care of her, so she __________chocolates for each of the three shifts of nurses. As we gave the current shift of nurses their box of chocolate, they __________offered some to me before taking some themselves.
There were__________all around. Witnessing the old lady’s__________and getting the opportunity to spend time with someone who got so much joy from life was a __________in itself. I have so many more stories, and each person made an impact on my life. I’ve __________that health has a way of bringing people together. __________is a blessing, and being in a place where health is so __________ and appreciated is unlike anything else.
1.A.introduce B.meet C.attract D.describe
2.A.elderly B.strange C.important D.famous
3.A.nurses B.kids C.patients D.parents
4.A.pretended B.wanted C.failed D.promised
5.A.car B.shopping cart C.wheel chair D.bike
6.A.ride B.walk C.drive D.wait
7.A.relief B.anxiety C.joy D.puzzle
8.A.chose B.made C.used D.received
9.A.manner B.case C.direction D.point
10.A.prepare for B.make up C.figure out D.1ook through
11.A.Suddenly B.Eventually C.Fortunately D.Actually
12.A.explained B.declared C.expected D.imagined
13.A.exchanged B.designed C.tasted D.bought
14.A.in fact B.at a loss C.in turn D.at ease
15.A.whispers B.smiles C.shouts D.cheers
16.A.kindness B.choice C.decision D.1oneliness
17.A.1esson B.chance C.gift D.fact
18.A.concluded B.imagined C.predicted D.1earned
19.A.Health B.Luck C.Virtue D.Praise
20.A.tested B.valued C.maintained D.promoted
A good training partner can be a great asset(有用的人)to your training but if you get stuck with a bad one，it could lead you down the road to frustration. 1.Here are a few things to look out for： Dependable. Choose someone who you are sure will show up for every scheduled workout or who will call you if they can't make it. It is a drain(消耗) on your valuable energy especially before training to have to constantly remind your partner.
Attitude. Get a partner with a positive attitude. This is very important. If they constantly say that something impossible or that they can't or you can't do something，you may end up believing them. 2.
Open mind. Get a partner with an open mind. Someone who has to do things his or her way all the time，will not listen to you and will not change his or her mind isn't a good partner. 3.The leader should take into account the needs and feelings of the other partner not totally ignoring them.
Spotting. Get someone you feel comfortable with spotting you. One of the main roles of a training partner is spotting and if you don't trust them，there's not much point in having them around to help.
4.If you are a beginner，try to find someone who knows what they are doing. You will get more out of your training than if you train with another beginner.
While there are a number of advantages of having training partner，there are also advantages of working alone. 5.
A.Training level.
B.Similar strength levels.
C.Be selective when choosing a training partner.
D.Find someone with a similar training goal as you.
E.In every partnership，one person will tend to be the leader.
F.Do not train with someone who is satisfied with no improvement.
G.In the end，it is really up to you whether or not you need a training partner.
Over a hundred years ago in 1911, something strange was found in the glaciers of Antarctica. Grilffith Taylor—an Australian geologist, had discovered a blood red steam pouring out of the ice cascades（瀑布）of Talor Glacier! Popularly known as the Blood Falls, scientists had not been able to find the reason behind the blood red liquid flowing through the ice---until recently. The mystery of the Blood Falls had finally been solved.
When these falls were first discovered, scientists had believed that the red colour came from a large amount of red algae（海藻）concentrated in the water. Red algae contain a pigment（色素）which reflects red light, making the algae appear red.
This theory made sense, until it was later found that algae do not play a part in the red color of the flowing liquid at all. What really causes Talor Glacier’s waters appear blood red, is the presence of iron oxide in the liquid. The waters of the blood falls are rich in salt and iron content, and when this water comes in contact with the air, it turns red—just like rust! The water in these falls is often referred to as “brine” by scientists because of the high salt content in the water.
This reasoning behind the red colors of the falls was found back in 2003. However, the entire mystery had not yet been solved. How is it then, that the Blood Falls are not frozen?
Researchers at the University of Colorado and University of Alaska found that inside the glacier, there was a network of channels and reservoirs that move the water around. Salt water has a lower freezing temperature. In addition, when any substance undergoes a change in state, it gives off heat. Therefore, the brine actually warm itself up while it’s freezing! How this works, is that when the brine is flowing through the Talor Glacier, some of it does freeze. As a result of changing state from liquid to ice, the brine gives off heat. This heat is enough to keep the rest of the rest of the brine in liquid form, which is why it flows out of the glacier.
Incredible new chemistry facts found, any mystery solved!
1.According to the text, the red algae theory was once considered ________.
A.ridiculous B.reasonable
C.impractical D.complex
2.Why does the Blood Falls look red in colour?
A.Because there is too much salt and iron in its water.
B.Because its liquid is rich in red algae.
C.Because the following liquid reflects and sunlight
D.Because the air is thin and rare in Antarctica.
3.What is the main reason for the Blood Fall’s not freezing?
A.The water continued flowing constantly.
B.There is too much salt in the water.
C.The brine gives off heat while freezing
D.Temperatures aren’t high enough for flowing water.
4.What is the passage mainly about?
A.The discovery of the blood glacier.
B.The birth of the Talor Glacier.
C.The flowing red water in Antarctica.
D.The mystery of the Blood Falls.
Bees play a vital role in the world. Unfortunately, bees are dying by the second.
The main purpose of bees is to make honey. Honey, shockingly, does not exist for human consumption, it is essential to the insects. Honeybees store honey in their hives (蜂巢) in order for the bees to have energy for their flight muscles and for heating the hive during the winter period. They collect pollen (花粉) which supplies protein for young bees to grow.
According to Honey, com, the increased production and quality of agricultural crops as a result of honey bee pollination is valued more than $14.6 billion per year. These insects are responsible for over 70 of the fruits and vegetables we eat today, including apples, grapes, coffee, beans, and broccoli.
So if they are so valuable to agriculture, why do they keep dying off? A key suspect seems to be pesticides (农药). Honeybees who are exposed to pesticides result in the damage to their neurological (神经的) functions, specifically memory or behavior. And that’s why the majority of worker bees disappear and leave behind a queen, plenty of food and a few nurse bees to care for the remaining immature bees and the queen. There are several other causes to the decline of bees, including the destruction of natural habitat, like woodlands, forests, and other habitats for bees. Climate change is also a factor in the decline of the wild bee population.
Actually, there are a variety of methods to help the bee population grow. One way is to start your own organic garden by planting bee-friendly plants. Pesticides are used in both industrial practices and even in your home, so it is best to find organic seeds and weed killers.
1.Why do honeybees store honey in their hives?
A.To provide enough honey for human to consume.
B.To draw protein out of honey for young bees.
C.To help attract other insects and make hives stronger.
D.To strengthen bee muscles and heat hives in winter.
2.Apples and beans are mentioned in the third paragraph to show that ________.
A.bees supply human beings with basic food
B.bees mainly live on these agricultural crops
C.bees are of great importance to fruits and vegetables
D.bees can bring in more money for famers every year
3.What is most likely to cause the worker bees to leave their hives behind?
A.The lack of food.
B.The abuse of pesticides.
C.The fighting among bees.
D.The destruction of the habitats.
4.What would the author probably discuss in the paragraph that follows?
A.Another way to save bees.
B.Other tips for choosing seeds.
C.More methods to plant green organic fruits.
D.Causes of the decline in the wild bee population.
