Question

假定你是李华,你想邀请你的留学生朋友Chris参加“青年回乡建设美丽乡村”的志愿活动，请你根据下面所给的要求给他写一封邮件：

1. 活动时间、地点；

2. 活动带来的收获。

要求：1. 词数：80左右；

2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Dear Chris,

I'd like to invite you to take part in the "The youth return home to build a village" voluntary activity to be held in my hometown on Sunday afternoon.

In this activity, not only will we gather rubbish from the river but also we're expected to plant some trees and flowers along the road. Additionally, you'll get more experience of protecting environment and admire the beauty of modern countryside.

Looking forward to your participation.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封邮件。

第一步：

审题：邮件 邀请Chris参加“青年回乡建设美丽乡村”的志愿活动

人称：第一、二人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分提出邀请，第二部分说明活动的具体安排和会得到的收获，第三部分期待Chris的参加。

要点：

1. 提出邀请：邀请Chris参加“青年回乡建设美丽乡村”的志愿活动

2．具体的活动安排

①时间、地点：周日下午，在我的家乡

②活动内容：从河里捡垃圾、沿路植树种花

③收获：获得保护环境的经验、欣赏乡村美景

3．询问对安排的看法，并表达祝愿

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

invite sb. to do…； take part in；voluntary activity；hold；gather rubbish ；plant trees and flowers ；get experience of ；protect the environment；admire the beauty；participation.

第三步：连词成句

(1)I'd like to invite you to take part in the "The youth return home to build a village" voluntary activity.

(2) The activity is to be held in my hometown on Sunday afternoon.

(3) We will we gather rubbish from the river.

(4) We will plant some trees and flowers along the road.

(5) You'll get more experience of protecting environment.

(6) You will admire the beauty of modern countryside.

(7) Looking forward to your participation.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。